Comedy web series would love feedback!

[Sassers_]

Hi everyone in yttalk land! I just launched my first comedy web seriesand would love feedback! Please feel free to leave comments on the actual youtube video and please be gentle and constructive!

Brief synopsis:
After 34 years in the Sunday Funnies, Cathy's cartoon is canceled. Now she has to do the impossible to get it back... Become a feminist!

 

[xingcat]

It's fun! I think the acting and picture/sound quality are excellent. I think the main worry I'd have is that, even though this is a parody, you may run into issues with the copyright holders of Cathy comics. Melissa Hunter's "Grown Up Wednesday Addams" series was pulled in its entirety, even though it was a clear parody.

 

[TheAlphaJayShow]

My first impression is that your quality, on a technical term, is amazing. The editing is tight, the video quality is standard (to my knowledge) and the graphics isn't too bad. As far as the comedy goes, it did get a laugh or two out of me, (like when she used the fork as a spoon and the cake fell), so yeah, it isn't bad. I could see this getting a really good following, as long as it stays consistent. Shows like these seem to take a while, (unlike vlogs, howtos, and let's plays), with scripting and production itself. But I love it, everything down to the set design and the other characters. (The swearing might have cut your younger audiences though )

 

[Sassers_]

It's fun! I think the acting and picture/sound quality are excellent. I think the main worry I'd have is that, even though this is a parody, you may run into issues with the copyright holders of Cathy comics. Melissa Hunter's "Grown Up Wednesday Addams" series was pulled in its entirety, even though it was a clear parody.

Thank you so much! And thank you for commenting on youtube!! Thank you for your feedback. I think the reason the Adams' estate pulled Melissa's off youtube is because they are planning on a reboot. It is unfortunate. The author of Cathy is officially retired. Also, I don't have the following that Melissa Hunter has. If for any reason it does get pulled I figure it is a good problem to have because it means enough people have heard about it that it got back to the creator of Cathy. Thank you again for your comments. I look forward to checking out your youtube channel as well![DOUBLEPOST=1449615447,1449615325][/DOUBLEPOST]

My first impression is that your quality, on a technical term, is amazing. The editing is tight, the video quality is standard (to my knowledge) and the graphics isn't too bad. As far as the comedy goes, it did get a laugh or two out of me, (like when she used the fork as a spoon and the cake fell), so yeah, it isn't bad. I could see this getting a really good following, as long as it stays consistent. Shows like these seem to take a while, (unlike vlogs, howtos, and let's plays), with scripting and production itself. But I love it, everything down to the set design and the other characters. (The swearing might have cut your younger audiences though )

Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback! That is very helpful to hear. When trying to get advice on youtube it's hard to find advice for scripted videos. The tips are all for vloggers, howtos, let's plays etc. So it's nice to hear it is possible, just got to keep going! Thank you!