Ok- all those who've requested, there were quite some people who wanted a review so most will have to wait till tomorrow- soz!
Can you review my channel please
alright there we go
I reviewed your skyfall video-
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You talk all the time, definitely a big plus
The intro at 45 seconds is clear and makes it understandable
Your voice is clearly heard, the music in the background also has the right volume
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The intro at 45 seconds is a bit late, it was a bit weird as a viewer, as i had no idea what was going on
The first three minutes of jumping down are a bit of repetitive, actually, the entire thing is you jumping down. so maybe put some more variety in your video. skip some parts if needed.
summary-ish: you're good at speaking, big plus, but theres definitely space for improvement
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imma review your channel trailer where you play ghosts
+
good intro
clear voice
constantly talking
a lot of information about the future put in there, a viewer knows what's up on your channel
good outro
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the topic 'how i'm doing at YouTube is not always that interesting. (this is the only vid i checked tho, so idk how you usually do it)
you don't seem to put much emotion in the let's play, maybe you should attempt putting some more variety in your way of speaking.
The problem with the game you're playing: its CoD. also the other game i see you've played is minecraft. Because of the overload of those vids, you really need to put in extra effort to make it something watch-worthy.
all in all- talking skills are there, your intro and outro are well organized but could use some more variety to increase the entertainment value
SORRY for the rest guys, i'll try checking you out tomorrow