Am I offensive/insulting

Cookie6

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Hey everyone,

So i've posted this video on Reddit for people to respond to and I got a mixed bag of constructive criticism come back to me which I really appreciated and I wanted to open this up to you lovely folk at YTtalk aswell.

So basically, I feel like some of what I say in the video can or may be seen as offensive or insulting to people in different ways, for example, after the first segment where I say "Women are predictable" and the School Shooting segment and possibly more too.

I want to push grey areas as I feel that's fine but I don't want to just outright offend people.

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TBH as a viewer I would pass because of the title.
It isn't clear if I am gonna watch someone talking about young kids playing shooting games online or
the opposite that title suggests...
:p :)
 

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TBH as a viewer I would pass because of the title.
It isn't clear if I am gonna watch someone talking about young kids playing shooting games online or
the opposite that title suggests...
:p :)
Yeah that’s understandable. I needed it to be somewhat curious enough for people to click without it being all out click bait
 
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Some people are soft, forget what people think, you got something to say, say it!
 
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well your not going to get it monetised with that intro i would guess. Theres an audience for your frankie boyle style humour.. i guess if it's controversial topics ask yourself if you have reached his level first though else it may not be received as you intended. You got skills though