call.me.oli
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Hey! If and when you get the chance, could I get some feedback on my channel? Thanks!
@KaziproductionsHD
As requested I'll only provide feedback on this one video.
The entire video is extremely well produced. The frame around the videos is simple yet effective and the motion graphics (lower thirds and countdown numbers) are beautifully crafted. If you made the motions graphics yourself then congratulations, they're top notch! If you've used template files (from Videohive.net for example) then at least you've done a good enough job of making them your own.
My only criticism comes down to the transitions between the countdown number and video clip shown. Right now you have a beautifully rendered motion graphic showing the number of the segment which then immediately cuts to black, followed by a "fade-from-black" transition into the clip with the frame. The way the audio fades in and out is also poorly done. Try to create (or find) a transition that mimics pages of a comic book turning/flipping and use that to transition between the number and clip, as it'll match the frame you've got. You can also use that time to blend the audio rather than fade it out and then in again. Basically you should try to avoid fades as much as possible and stick to hard cuts and transitions.
Apart from that, fantastic work with the video! I definitely would like to see more videos of that quality going forward. Best of luck to you!
Thank you very much for the feedback. it is really highly appreciated and im happy to find someone that actually gives it a thought and writes something more than good/bad.Apologies for the delay. Let's continue...
@GameR_GmR
It's great that you're using the colour yellow consistently as the basis of your brand. What isn't so great is the cheap font, lazy thumbnail design and the complete lack of using your logo (the yellow 'GMR' in your videos) in your avatar and channel header. Using the 'GMR' logo, you need to redesign all of your visual assets.
For your avatar and channel header, simply use your 'GMR' logo. As an addition to your channel header, add in some information regarding what your channel is about, what your social media links are or, if you have one, a schedule of when you upload your content. For your thumbnails, consistency across all of them will help potential viewers know the content belongs to you. Place your 'GMR' logo in the top right hand corner and use the bottom left corner to place your headings for your videos. Instead of using your current font/typeface, select something that looks a little more professional. You can find a lot of fonts over at https://dafont.com that for the most part are completely free to use.
Content wise, I've noticed that you've made the same spelling mistake across your latest 5 videos - 'Thank you rof watching!' I don't know how you missed that but it needs to be corrected for future videos. Your videos are mostly montage clips but they're not all that exciting to look at. You should think about editing your cuts in time with the music you've selected. It'll help keep the attention of your potential viewers.
That's about all the advice I can offer to you at the moment. Make your brand consistent and time your edits to the music. Good luck and have fun!
@GoldSnoopy
You're not wrong. You really do have a nice setup!
With the video you linked, the first four and a half minutes are completely unneccessary as you're just reading information from a website that anyone interested in Dota2 would already know. The rest of the video is fine.
Branding wise your channel is all over the place. You've got a logo in your avatar that is not used anywhere else in your brand, your channel header is a collection of promotional material for games with a slapped on font/typeface that is completely different to the font/typeface you're using in your thumbnails. Going forward you need to make sure that you have a strong brand that remains consistent throughout all of your visual assets.
I like the red and white colour scheme you're using for the text in your thumbnails so use that as the base for your brand. From there, go to https://logopond.com to get some inspiration on logo and brand designs and start sketching out your new logo. Try and incorporate the red and white colour scheme into it. Once you're done, use that logo everywhere across your channel - avatar, channel header, thumbnails, logo sting, end card, brand watermark etc. Consistency is key here.
Content wise there really isn't much I can add. Your setup really is top notch and your game capture is solid. All you really need to improve upon for the moment is your branding. Make it look professional, make it look good and you should start to see some improvement. Best of luck to you!