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@MZ-101

Of course I'll do a follow up and yes, I have watched your latest videos.

I definitely like the new direction for your thumbnails! The 'light beam'/'light leak' effect matches the effect you've got in your channel header and the font/typeface you've used is very similar to your logo. It looks great! One thing I would add is your 'MZ' logo into the opposite corner of your text; if your text is in the upper left corner, put your logo in the bottom right.

The way you start your videos is spot on; quick logo, straight into your content. One thing I would suggest is to either reduce the lens flare effect in the background of your logo sting or make the 'MZ' stand out more. At the moment, the 'MZ' logo blends perfectly with the lens flare so you can't really see it.

Now, let's get to the issue at hand based on your 'I AM QUITTING!?' video. A large portion of the video was talking about the attention rates; that even though you're getting 100-200 views for a 10 minute video, people are only watching about 2-3 minutes, possibly less. The reality of the situation is this - no matter how long or short your video is, you will always, ALWAYS, have low attention rates.

About a decade ago (probably 12-13 years now), I did a web design course and one of the major lessons wasn't about the design aspect at all but rather the psycological mentality of people. Back then the idea was simple - if people couldn't get to what they wanted to see within about 10-20 seconds, you've lost that user completely. With that mindset, one would then design a web site where all links were viewable (the navigation was clear) and the site overall was very pleasant to look at - bright colours, clean and easy to read fonts/typefaces etc.

Since that time, mobile phones became more advanced into what we see now, allowing anyone, anywhere (for the most part) to access the internet and get any piece of information they want right at their fingertips. They no longer needed to sit in front of a computer to Google something, they could do it right from their phone! Despite this advancement in technology the principles of web design were still very much the same, with one small change. Yes, you still make your site pleasant to look at and easy to navigate (which is why most sites nowadays adopt a 'one page' design - where all information is present on a single page). However, instead of giving people the information they want within 10-20 seconds, they now need to be able to get that information INSTANTLY.

Now, think about the rise of social media; sites (and Apps) like Facebook, Twitter, Snapchat, Instagram, Tinder and yes, even YouTube. What one individual can do now completely outpaces what a person could do 10 years ago. Back then a person would only visit a few pages per day. Nowadays people are multitasking between several different sites at once. The attention spans of the average person are so incredibly small due to the division of their attention that it's impossible to keep them in one place for a long period of time.

Apply this thinking to your channel. If peoples' attention spans are so incredibly small that it's almost impossible to keep them focused on one video, why change yourself, your content and your direction to try and fix an analytic, a statistic, a number that is completely useless? Most of the major channels on YouTube are feeling the exact same effects. If you look at PewDiePie or Markiplier and compare their subscriber count to their view count and you can see a massive divide. Ignoring views/subscriber counts, I can tell you for a fact that my channel is also feeling those effects. I've got content ranging from 20 seconds to 35 minutes and yet every single video, EVERY SINGLE ONE (yes, even the 18-20 second ones) have an attention rate of about 20% or less. Take a step back and think about that - a person nowadays can't even be bothered to watch a video literally 20 seconds long. THAT'S how bad the attention span of people are now.

What you did was fall into a trap that I've been trying to steer people away from here on YTTalk (when required/requested/appropriate) since the beginning. The more you focus on trying to gain subscribers, views, attention rates, or any other kind of analytic, the more you start to lose your own voice, your uniqueness and overall, yourself. At that point you're no longer making videos because you want to; you're making videos to watch an arbitrary number go up.

Like you, I've had many people telling me how I should 'make' or direct others to make content. "The videos are too long, make them shorter!" "Have a catchy title!" "Do what this other channel does!" "The videos aren't long enough, make them longer!" Every single time I've metaphorically given them the stiff middle finger and told them to go **** themselves. What you need to realise is that you don't become successful by making content specifically FOR other people (as strange as that sounds). You make content that YOU want to make and if people can see that passion and enjoy what you've made, they will keep coming back for more.

Want proof of this? Look at James Rolfe, better known as 'The Angry Video Game Nerd.' If you look back at his earlier stuff and heard him talking about how he started, he literally made his show because he thought it would be funny. Not once did he ever expect that his videos would turn into (at the time) a worldwide phenomenon and major franchise. It wasn't until later where it was clear that he was finished with his 'Nerd' persona and wanted to stop but his most rabid fans kept demanding more. At that point you can see his passion dying and was simply going through the motions to get paid. Kind of like how PewDiePie and Markiplier are now.

Right now I can tell you have a lack of passion. You've been making videos for over 3 years and have seen no real gains (although you're doing a hell of a lot better than me in the same time frame). To me, you've focused so hard on raising subscriber counts and views that you've lost sight of why you want to make videos in the first place. Do you want fame? Do you want money? Or do you want to make videos because you desperately want to? That you want to make videos because you can't see yourself doing anything else?

To borrow a quote - if you want to succeed as bad as you want to breathe, then you WILL succeed. If this is what you truly want, that you absolutely could not live without, then come hell or high water you will make this work! You're not going to let arbitrary numbers dictate what you can and can't do. You are going to do whatever it is you need to do and you're not going to let anything stop you.

The video is out and you've made up your mind - 201 subs by January 2017 or you're done. I recommend you take an introspective look at yourself and find out what it is you want out of this. Once you've found your desire, regained that passion, reignited that flame, do whatever it is you need to do, hell, make a channel completely new if you have to.

Sorry for the long winded pep-talk. I hope this helps guide you. Sure, it's not technical advice or branding advice but I think it's something everyone needs to read every once in a while. Thanks for the shoutout in your video and I hope that you succeed.
Ever since I started making videos I was always, thought "Make awesome videos. People will come". Every time, 'till this day and I'm working on a video now...! I always, tell myself "This is gonna blow everyone's minds!". I work hard on my videos. I think even you noticed that. I actually am a Lazy person believe it or not but, people tell me that one of my worst traits (or best to others) is that I'm intricate. I can move on with something until it's perfect by my standard. I've always, thought I'll start community because, of what I produce. Even before I started making videos. Not fame (yeah, maybe fame too) but, a sense of people coming together to enjoy something. Leave their opinion. I don't give a single flying f**k about what kind of opinion they leave (Hence, why I say I don't give a f**k about the Dislikes at the end of my videos) just say something. I got a small story to tell... Before I started making videos... I said. I'm not gonna show my face nor talk about my personal life in my channel. Not until I reach 1000 Subscribers. It became sort of a promise after a while. Now, as silly as this sounds now (Face Reveal!!). Back on 2011. I thought it was (and still is) justifiable... If I seen someone with less than 1000 Subs making videos. All I will care about is his content (Especially Gaming Channels). If content is good? Then, I'm Subscribing... That idea kept me going until today. Don't give a s**t about anything else other than the content. Yet, there was always that part of me that peeked at the analytic. Mostly on a monthly basis... Just so, I know what's happening with my Channel and every year I see barely any growth and I start to notice channels that started at similar time as mine growing exponentially in a shorter time frame. I start to ask. What is it I'm doing wrong? I asked friends, YouTube viewers, Hell! Even you. And everyone replies with just fix these minor problems and you're good to go yet, I wasn't. This challenge is not meant to fulfill some analytic milestone.... But, to beat what the system thinks I'll get on January. It's to prove to myself that "I. Am. That. Good!" and if I wasn't? Well... Then after 5 years (technically 3). No point in doing something that doesn't fulfill me anymore. Something that isn't even good enough to beat a simple projection of myself...

Also, I like the fact that you don't give a f**k. We would've been best friends. Walk around... Middle fingers in the air!

PS. If I have any spelling mistakes or words from a sentence that made it sound weird. I'm sorry but, I'm busy with the video and I didn't double check. You should check my latest video. If you haven't "Who Won E3 2016" changed my style a little. Also, watch a video called "The Comeback". You'll know why...
 
An outside opinion might just be what I need....

I would be super amped if you check out my channel. I only started 3 weeks ago so I still got alot to learn.

Thanks for checking it out! You're a legend!!!!:thumbsup2:[DOUBLEPOST=1468432042,1468431926][/DOUBLEPOST]
Greetings everyone! Although I am new to YTTalk I'll be more than happy to check out any of your channels and offer my advice and honest critiques about them. A fresh pair of eyes just might be what your channel needs.

There are no stirct guidelines. Your channel can be about anything, target any demographic and be of any size. I'll offer my constructive criticisms regarding content, branding, art or technical issues.

Shall we begin?

An outside opinion might just be what I need....

I would be super amped if you check out my channel. I only started 3 weeks ago so I still got alot to learn.

Thanks for checking it out! You're a legend!!!!:thumbsup2:
 
I apologise for the late response. Let's get right to it!

@TownCape

Ah, we meet again, old friend. Based on your Vocaroo clip, I'm looking forward to listening and watching your Uncharted video.

You say you're recovering from a cold (and it might be due to the low quality rendering of Vocaroo) but to be honest I can't tell the difference between your vocals in the Vocaroo clip and your major video productions. It doesn't sound like you have a cold at all.

Don't forget about my previous advice - slow down your speech, enounciate your words and make sure you're clear and easy to understand. If you have to, record each line seperately and don't move on to the next line until you nail the delivery perfectly.


@terror569

Of course I'm still doing this! As requested, my critique will be exclusively on your latest video.

I have noticed that your gameplay footage is quite low quality and recorded in a very low framerate (sub 24, possibly 12). For future videos you should try and capture the game in the best possible quality and the highest framerate.

In terms of audio, it sounds like you're using your webcam/camera microphone which is giving your vocals a bit of distortion and lacking clarity. If you haven't got one, invest in a high quality condenser microphone and pop filter. If you do have one, make sure you record in the highest possible settings before rendering your video down.

Editing wise I like what you've done so definitely keep it up. As you mentioned in your video, there are a few mistakes but as long as you're aware of where you need to improve you'll do fine.

That's about it. Keep up a regular upload schedule and have fun making videos! Good luck!


@MZ-101

All good man, I understand exactly what you were getting at even with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I'm glad I've relit the flame for you. Now you have to carry that torch as far as you can.

The reason why I made mention about your thumbnails and said "fix it and you're good to go" is because traditionally that would have helped. However, one aspect I forgot to mention is the fact that this is YouTube. There are those who claim to know exactly what it is you need to do to succeed but the reality is that it's all theoretical. No one actually knows how YouTube works. No one knows how a video goes viral. No one can accurately and successfully tell you step by step how to make your audience grow. No one can claim to know how YouTubes' algorithm works. That includes me.

Most of my advice comes down to the technical/production aspect (microphones, filming etc) or branding (logos, headers etc). Those are two of the most important aspects one needs to concentrate on. I mentioned this several times in this thread (maybe once to you, I can't remember) but even though you've been making videos for over 3 years, there have been people making content on YouTube far longer than that. We're talking 5-7 years, if not more. These are creators who have perfected their branding, their direction, their personality and their production quality. When starting, if you can't compete with that, you have no chance in hell of ever succeeding.

If I may, I'd like to give a final bit of advice after watching your latest videos again (not guaranteed mind you). One aspect you can work on is how you construct your discussion points. Most of your videos don't really have a script which results in your rambling and repeating several lines over and over again. Give this a shot - write out a script (in your own words of course, don't try and force yourself to act any differently) and record yourself going down the script line by line. Don't move on to the next line until you've perfected the delivery of that line. When I say keep recording one line over and over, I mean at least 2-3 times. In your audio editing program of choice, simply cut out the lines that aren't perfect and cut them together to make it seem as though it was one straight take (this is what I use for iNTERACT: The News).

Give that a shot and see if it helps. Either way, I'm glad to see you haven't given up yet. Keep at it!


@SilverFuze

Right off the bat your brand looks cheap and is also inconsistent. The 'SF' font/typeface used in your avatar is completely different to the one used in your channel header. What you need is a solid brand that is unique to your channel. You can get some branding inspiration by looking at this site: https://logopond.com

What you can do, since you like the 'lightning' motif, is design a logo where the 'S' and 'F' letters form the lightning bolt. Try a few variants and see which one looks good to you. Failing that, you can commission a graphic designer to make one for you. Once you have that logo, use that as the basis of your brand going forward.

To add to that, make sure you keep the same base colour style and font/typeface throughout all of your graphic assets. Blue, Cyan, Purple, Dark Blue, whatever colour you decide on, make sure your avatar, channel header and thumbnails all stick to it. The same applies to your text. Choose a font/typeface that best represents you and your channel and use it consistently.

Content wise, audio is your major issue. You're using your on camera microphone which is causing a lot of background noise and reverb to get into your recordings. I'm also noticing a lot of peaking. If you're able to, save up some money and invest in either a lavalier/lapel microphone or shotgun microphone for your camera. It'll help give more clarity and quality to your vlogs.

Work on your brand, work on your audio and you're good to go. Best of luck to you!
 
I apologise for the late response. Let's get right to it!

@TownCape

Ah, we meet again, old friend. Based on your Vocaroo clip, I'm looking forward to listening and watching your Uncharted video.

You say you're recovering from a cold (and it might be due to the low quality rendering of Vocaroo) but to be honest I can't tell the difference between your vocals in the Vocaroo clip and your major video productions. It doesn't sound like you have a cold at all.

Don't forget about my previous advice - slow down your speech, enounciate your words and make sure you're clear and easy to understand. If you have to, record each line seperately and don't move on to the next line until you nail the delivery perfectly.

Thanks. Also if it isn't too much trouble can you point out a few of the words that you believe I'm not enounciating properly? Also can you point out one sentence which you think I've nailed by having the right pace and being clear and easy to understand?
 
I apologise for the late response. Let's get right to it!

@TownCape

Ah, we meet again, old friend. Based on your Vocaroo clip, I'm looking forward to listening and watching your Uncharted video.

You say you're recovering from a cold (and it might be due to the low quality rendering of Vocaroo) but to be honest I can't tell the difference between your vocals in the Vocaroo clip and your major video productions. It doesn't sound like you have a cold at all.

Don't forget about my previous advice - slow down your speech, enounciate your words and make sure you're clear and easy to understand. If you have to, record each line seperately and don't move on to the next line until you nail the delivery perfectly.


@terror569

Of course I'm still doing this! As requested, my critique will be exclusively on your latest video.

I have noticed that your gameplay footage is quite low quality and recorded in a very low framerate (sub 24, possibly 12). For future videos you should try and capture the game in the best possible quality and the highest framerate.

In terms of audio, it sounds like you're using your webcam/camera microphone which is giving your vocals a bit of distortion and lacking clarity. If you haven't got one, invest in a high quality condenser microphone and pop filter. If you do have one, make sure you record in the highest possible settings before rendering your video down.

Editing wise I like what you've done so definitely keep it up. As you mentioned in your video, there are a few mistakes but as long as you're aware of where you need to improve you'll do fine.

That's about it. Keep up a regular upload schedule and have fun making videos! Good luck!


@MZ-101

All good man, I understand exactly what you were getting at even with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I'm glad I've relit the flame for you. Now you have to carry that torch as far as you can.

The reason why I made mention about your thumbnails and said "fix it and you're good to go" is because traditionally that would have helped. However, one aspect I forgot to mention is the fact that this is YouTube. There are those who claim to know exactly what it is you need to do to succeed but the reality is that it's all theoretical. No one actually knows how YouTube works. No one knows how a video goes viral. No one can accurately and successfully tell you step by step how to make your audience grow. No one can claim to know how YouTubes' algorithm works. That includes me.

Most of my advice comes down to the technical/production aspect (microphones, filming etc) or branding (logos, headers etc). Those are two of the most important aspects one needs to concentrate on. I mentioned this several times in this thread (maybe once to you, I can't remember) but even though you've been making videos for over 3 years, there have been people making content on YouTube far longer than that. We're talking 5-7 years, if not more. These are creators who have perfected their branding, their direction, their personality and their production quality. When starting, if you can't compete with that, you have no chance in hell of ever succeeding.

If I may, I'd like to give a final bit of advice after watching your latest videos again (not guaranteed mind you). One aspect you can work on is how you construct your discussion points. Most of your videos don't really have a script which results in your rambling and repeating several lines over and over again. Give this a shot - write out a script (in your own words of course, don't try and force yourself to act any differently) and record yourself going down the script line by line. Don't move on to the next line until you've perfected the delivery of that line. When I say keep recording one line over and over, I mean at least 2-3 times. In your audio editing program of choice, simply cut out the lines that aren't perfect and cut them together to make it seem as though it was one straight take (this is what I use for iNTERACT: The News).

Give that a shot and see if it helps. Either way, I'm glad to see you haven't given up yet. Keep at it!


@SilverFuze

Right off the bat your brand looks cheap and is also inconsistent. The 'SF' font/typeface used in your avatar is completely different to the one used in your channel header. What you need is a solid brand that is unique to your channel. You can get some branding inspiration by looking at this site: https://logopond.com

What you can do, since you like the 'lightning' motif, is design a logo where the 'S' and 'F' letters form the lightning bolt. Try a few variants and see which one looks good to you. Failing that, you can commission a graphic designer to make one for you. Once you have that logo, use that as the basis of your brand going forward.

To add to that, make sure you keep the same base colour style and font/typeface throughout all of your graphic assets. Blue, Cyan, Purple, Dark Blue, whatever colour you decide on, make sure your avatar, channel header and thumbnails all stick to it. The same applies to your text. Choose a font/typeface that best represents you and your channel and use it consistently.

Content wise, audio is your major issue. You're using your on camera microphone which is causing a lot of background noise and reverb to get into your recordings. I'm also noticing a lot of peaking. If you're able to, save up some money and invest in either a lavalier/lapel microphone or shotgun microphone for your camera. It'll help give more clarity and quality to your vlogs.

Work on your brand, work on your audio and you're good to go. Best of luck to you!


Thanks alot for the help man! Do you think it's a good idea to use a picture of my face as the Avatar?
 
I apologise for the late response. Let's get right to it!

@TownCape

Ah, we meet again, old friend. Based on your Vocaroo clip, I'm looking forward to listening and watching your Uncharted video.

You say you're recovering from a cold (and it might be due to the low quality rendering of Vocaroo) but to be honest I can't tell the difference between your vocals in the Vocaroo clip and your major video productions. It doesn't sound like you have a cold at all.

Don't forget about my previous advice - slow down your speech, enounciate your words and make sure you're clear and easy to understand. If you have to, record each line seperately and don't move on to the next line until you nail the delivery perfectly.


@terror569

Of course I'm still doing this! As requested, my critique will be exclusively on your latest video.

I have noticed that your gameplay footage is quite low quality and recorded in a very low framerate (sub 24, possibly 12). For future videos you should try and capture the game in the best possible quality and the highest framerate.

In terms of audio, it sounds like you're using your webcam/camera microphone which is giving your vocals a bit of distortion and lacking clarity. If you haven't got one, invest in a high quality condenser microphone and pop filter. If you do have one, make sure you record in the highest possible settings before rendering your video down.

Editing wise I like what you've done so definitely keep it up. As you mentioned in your video, there are a few mistakes but as long as you're aware of where you need to improve you'll do fine.

That's about it. Keep up a regular upload schedule and have fun making videos! Good luck!


@MZ-101

All good man, I understand exactly what you were getting at even with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I'm glad I've relit the flame for you. Now you have to carry that torch as far as you can.

The reason why I made mention about your thumbnails and said "fix it and you're good to go" is because traditionally that would have helped. However, one aspect I forgot to mention is the fact that this is YouTube. There are those who claim to know exactly what it is you need to do to succeed but the reality is that it's all theoretical. No one actually knows how YouTube works. No one knows how a video goes viral. No one can accurately and successfully tell you step by step how to make your audience grow. No one can claim to know how YouTubes' algorithm works. That includes me.

Most of my advice comes down to the technical/production aspect (microphones, filming etc) or branding (logos, headers etc). Those are two of the most important aspects one needs to concentrate on. I mentioned this several times in this thread (maybe once to you, I can't remember) but even though you've been making videos for over 3 years, there have been people making content on YouTube far longer than that. We're talking 5-7 years, if not more. These are creators who have perfected their branding, their direction, their personality and their production quality. When starting, if you can't compete with that, you have no chance in hell of ever succeeding.

If I may, I'd like to give a final bit of advice after watching your latest videos again (not guaranteed mind you). One aspect you can work on is how you construct your discussion points. Most of your videos don't really have a script which results in your rambling and repeating several lines over and over again. Give this a shot - write out a script (in your own words of course, don't try and force yourself to act any differently) and record yourself going down the script line by line. Don't move on to the next line until you've perfected the delivery of that line. When I say keep recording one line over and over, I mean at least 2-3 times. In your audio editing program of choice, simply cut out the lines that aren't perfect and cut them together to make it seem as though it was one straight take (this is what I use for iNTERACT: The News).

Give that a shot and see if it helps. Either way, I'm glad to see you haven't given up yet. Keep at it!


@SilverFuze

Right off the bat your brand looks cheap and is also inconsistent. The 'SF' font/typeface used in your avatar is completely different to the one used in your channel header. What you need is a solid brand that is unique to your channel. You can get some branding inspiration by looking at this site: https://logopond.com

What you can do, since you like the 'lightning' motif, is design a logo where the 'S' and 'F' letters form the lightning bolt. Try a few variants and see which one looks good to you. Failing that, you can commission a graphic designer to make one for you. Once you have that logo, use that as the basis of your brand going forward.

To add to that, make sure you keep the same base colour style and font/typeface throughout all of your graphic assets. Blue, Cyan, Purple, Dark Blue, whatever colour you decide on, make sure your avatar, channel header and thumbnails all stick to it. The same applies to your text. Choose a font/typeface that best represents you and your channel and use it consistently.

Content wise, audio is your major issue. You're using your on camera microphone which is causing a lot of background noise and reverb to get into your recordings. I'm also noticing a lot of peaking. If you're able to, save up some money and invest in either a lavalier/lapel microphone or shotgun microphone for your camera. It'll help give more clarity and quality to your vlogs.

Work on your brand, work on your audio and you're good to go. Best of luck to you!
Thank you very much! I gotta buy a new mic later I'm aware of that. Right now I'm sadly using iphone 4 for voice record since the headset and webcam mic isn't anything good.
 
@TownCape

Sure thing. Let's look at these particular lines from your Vocaroo file you linked (I'll write it and emphasise in bold what words you stress):

"That's what an Uncharted game is supposed to do. It's supposed to make the player feel like a relatively normal man, that overcomes overwhelming odds."

When you enounciate 'man' from the 'relatively normal man...' section, you drag out the 'a' sound longer than it needs to while adding in an upward inflection. You also pause after 'man' unnecessarily before continuing with the rest of the line. It all comes down to the way it's written; there shouldn't be a comma after 'man.'

Try saying the line like this, with bold emphasis being the words you stress on:

"That's what an Uncharted game is supposed to do - it's meant to make the player feel like a relatively normal man who overcomes overwhelming odds."

Furthermore, you repeat lines almost entirely when making the same point. Before the lines I was using as an example, let's look at the previous line:

"Nate is a relatively normal man who overcomes overwhelming odds."

Hear the issue? If we listen to how it plays out in your recording, it sounds completely redundant:

"Nate is a relatively normal man who overcomes overwhelming odds. That's what an Uncharted game is supposed to do - it's supposed to make the player feel like a relatively normal man that overcomes overwhelming odds."

That entire point can be re-written to flow a lot better like this:

"North really nails what playing as Nathan Drake is all about. Nate is a relatively normal man who overcomes overwhelming odds. That's what an Uncharted game is supposed to be!"

It's small adjustments like these can make your commentary flow better. Here's something to keep in mind - if it doesn't sound natural to you then it won't sound natural to your viewers.


@SilverFuze

It would definitely help add even more consistency as your thumbnails also feature images of you. Since what you've got is a vlogs channel, YOU are the brand. You could have a photo of yourself on one side of the thumbnail (right hand side for instance) while leaving enough room on the left hand side to add text. The photo of you can change between each video/thumbnail to help denote the mood, feeling or type of video it's going to be.
 
Hey could you look at my channel. I just posted a new video: POKEMON GO DEATH!?! OMG!!! I will be posting more videos like this. I am going to improve my channel by playing games like CoD: BO III, GTA V, CS: GO, etc. I am posting content daily and I am planning on posting life stories, tutorials (i.e.: rooting Android, creating a YouTube channel, making an explosion in After Effects), comedy skits, game reviews. I am planning on reviewing new games when they come out like: FIFA 17, PES 2017, CoD Infinite Warfare, MW Remastered, etc. I also review movies and talk about the hottest topics. I am also planning on having people send me links to online games, and I play them with facecam.
 
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