Your thoughts on a script?

ThatBoySab said:
I see where you're coming from. But you also have to see it in other peoples perspective. Not every parent will let a failing grade pass by like its nothing. The film wont have me beating up the child. lol It will just assume that I am. You get me?
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I understand that failing a grade is a major thing, I failed one of my early GCSE's but my parents didn't beat me for it. They just forced me to retake it.
 
Kate (Caitlin) said:
I understand that failing a grade is a major thing, I failed one of my early GCSE's but my parents didn't beat me for it. They just forced me to retake it.
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Well yeah, but you're not 8-10 years of age are you? Thats the age where a child SHOULD be getting spankings to do better. I sure didn't listen to my parents when I was 8 if they told me to do something, so that had to spank me.. am I not right? lol. Yes domestic abuse is bad, but it's not like we're making a joke about it. Simply trying to promote that failing is a bad thing and you should never doubt yourself.
 
ThatBoySab said:
Well yeah, but you're not 8-10 years of age are you? Thats the age where a child SHOULD be getting spankings to do better. I sure didn't listen to my parents when I was 8 if they told me to do something, so that had to spank me.. am I not right? lol. Yes domestic abuse is bad, but it's not like we're making a joke about it. Simply trying to promote that failing is a bad thing and you should never doubt yourself.
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If I may "“Beats Sam up with a belt, and punches her in the face”" By your words exactly, that's not a "spanking"
 
Kate (Caitlin) said:
If I may "“Beats Sam up with a belt, and punches her in the face”" By your words exactly, that's not a "spanking"
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Ah, I see what you're saying. That won't show in the video. It will be like right before I hit her, it skips to the next scene. The punches her in the face part is like an addon. I doubt I will be adding that into the video as like you said, it's kinda brutal just for a failing grade.
 
I don't know if i laughed harder than i should have at the end but its amazing, the details in action are great, Camera angles were described pretty well, could just use a tad bit more description, For example when the dad is walking towards the Room..Is the camera angle in front of the door showing the full hallway for a curtain time then switches to a door angle to see the Kalie and Sam talking, just those little things can help greatly
 
Earl Cooper said:
I don't know if i laughed harder than i should have at the end but its amazing, the details in action are great, Camera angles were described pretty well, could just use a tad bit more description, For example when the dad is walking towards the Room..Is the camera angle in front of the door showing the full hallway for a curtain time then switches to a door angle to see the Kalie and Sam talking, just those little things can help greatly
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Hey Earl! Thanks for you comment man. Means alot. I really didn't get into details with the camera angles which I should have. When the dad walks towards the room, I will have a low camera shot following him to the room kinda slowly, and then have another shot inside the room where you can see the dad peaking.
 
ThatBoySab said:
Hey Earl! Thanks for you comment man. Means alot. I really didn't get into details with the camera angles which I should have. When the dad walks towards the room, I will have a low camera shot following him to the room kinda slowly, and then have another shot inside the room where you can see the dad peaking.
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Yeah man, no problem! and you are a great writer would love to read it when its done!
 
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