Would love feedback on new funny montage!

[Ginkgo L3af]

Hey everyone, would love some feedback on the new video I posted. It's my channel trailer at the moment and was a lot of fun making. The channels brand new so I would love to see what you think of the trailer. Of course a lot can be improved but would love some input!

 

[CaptainRomulus]

Looks like a sick game man!
Maybe try and make the video a bit more snappy? I was left without dialogue for big parts of it, making it feel like it was dragging on.
And try a different font. Use a free, custom one from dafont.com perhaps?

But seriously man, keep going! Best of luck with your channel!

 

[Ginkgo L3af]

Looks like a sick game man!
Maybe try and make the video a bit more snappy? I was left without dialogue for big parts of it, making it feel like it was dragging on.
And try a different font. Use a free, custom one from dafont.com perhaps?

But seriously man, keep going! Best of luck with your channel!

Thanks for the feedback man. I made a couple more montages of random games, I think they're a little more fast paced!