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PartAndroid
Bad Jokes... Really...
Always need feedback and honest opinions.
Go nuts!
LostTrigger
YTtalk Mad
hey could you check this one out?
xJamesDC
I've Got It
I liked it. The quality was good, the 5 news stories were also great. The only criticism that I have for you is your'e pretty quiet. I like the humor in it, such as the math or when you were cutting out between the #'s. But, you were speaking quiet in my opinion. Maybe work on little more energy behind that voice, bring it out an be a little more energetic? Other than that, I really did enjoy this. Feel free to send me next weeks video too, I will look at it as well
Good job man. I hope my small criticism helped![DOUBLEPOST=1411681311,1411680860][/DOUBLEPOST]
This was a good video. Quality of the video was good. Few things I would fix: The quality of your mic. It sounds to me like it was muffled or from a webcam mic. If you really enjoy making youtube videos and will stick with it, try and invest into a nice microphone. Blue Snowball is a pretty cheap one, Audio Technia AT2020 is another example. With your commentary style, you kind of stayed one dimensional. What I mean by that is, there was really no dynamics in your voice. I felt like it was just the same tone, and also trying to smash a lot of details into this short video. Maybe for this video you could have dragged it out a little? Lastly, music was a little loud. Drop down the volume just a little bit! Other than it was a good video! Feel free and let me know when you post another video! I will be glad to check it out
Keep grinding man, hope my tips helps!
PartAndroid
Bad Jokes... Really...
I liked it. The quality was good, the 5 news stories were also great. The only criticism that I have for you is your'e pretty quiet. I like the humor in it, such as the math or when you were cutting out between the #'s. But, you were speaking quiet in my opinion. Maybe work on little more energy behind that voice, bring it out an be a little more energetic? Other than that, I really did enjoy this. Feel free to send me next weeks video too, I will look at it as well
This was a good video. Quality of the video was good. Few things I would fix: The quality of your mic. It sounds to me like it was muffled or from a webcam mic. If you really enjoy making youtube videos and will stick with it, try and invest into a nice microphone. Blue Snowball is a pretty cheap one, Audio Technia AT2020 is another example. With your commentary style, you kind of stayed one dimensional. What I mean by that is, there was really no dynamics in your voice. I felt like it was just the same tone, and also trying to smash a lot of details into this short video. Maybe for this video you could have dragged it out a little? Lastly, music was a little loud. Drop down the volume just a little bit! Other than it was a good video! Feel free and let me know when you post another video! I will be glad to check it out
Cheers dude! Yeah, the energy is something I'm trying to get the balance right on. Problem is I live in a house with 3 other people and I don't want to either disturb them or have them wondering what the hell is going on! Haha! It's good to know it's almost there.
And I will do, if you're willing to watch my videos! You can be my quality control
Thanks, it's appreciated
JoshstarTV
YTtalks Prankster
Hey James! Could you please review my latest VLOG its the latest video uploaded its the first official vlog for the channel. I have done a couple shorter ones but I'm calling this the first episode of my VLOGS. "Seemed like a good idea at the time"
I actually got the topic idea off another YTtalk member, cant remember who, but props to them!
Thanks champ!
Is the logo design on the monitor behind you green screened?
LostTrigger
YTtalk Mad
I liked it. The quality was good, the 5 news stories were also great. The only criticism that I have for you is your'e pretty quiet. I like the humor in it, such as the math or when you were cutting out between the #'s. But, you were speaking quiet in my opinion. Maybe work on little more energy behind that voice, bring it out an be a little more energetic? Other than that, I really did enjoy this. Feel free to send me next weeks video too, I will look at it as well
This was a good video. Quality of the video was good. Few things I would fix: The quality of your mic. It sounds to me like it was muffled or from a webcam mic. If you really enjoy making youtube videos and will stick with it, try and invest into a nice microphone. Blue Snowball is a pretty cheap one, Audio Technia AT2020 is another example. With your commentary style, you kind of stayed one dimensional. What I mean by that is, there was really no dynamics in your voice. I felt like it was just the same tone, and also trying to smash a lot of details into this short video. Maybe for this video you could have dragged it out a little? Lastly, music was a little loud. Drop down the volume just a little bit! Other than it was a good video! Feel free and let me know when you post another video! I will be glad to check it out
thanks for the advice. i could be wrong but it sounded better before i edited it through audacity, so it may have been the program. i'll try to consider everything next time!
xJamesDC
I've Got It
Hey James! Could you please review my latest VLOG its the latest video uploaded its the first official vlog for the channel. I have done a couple shorter ones but I'm calling this the first episode of my VLOGS. "Seemed like a good idea at the time"
I actually got the topic idea off another YTtalk member, cant remember who, but props to them!
Thanks champ!
HAHAHA I can't believe you did that. I really enjoyed the video. Few pointers. Lighting. Try and find a better spot in your house for lighting, or get another light around because the color of the video is pretty dull. With perspective to talking in the video, there really wasn't any dynamics. You kind of stayed at one tone the whole video.. Maybe add some more energy into talking. It was good that you spent that much time on the intro, because I did like the intro at the start. All in all, I enjoyed it man. Tweet @ me or message me the next time you post a video, I will for sure check it out! Keep up the good work, hopefully my tips help you out!
PartAndroid
Bad Jokes... Really...
Hey James! Could you please review my latest VLOG its the latest video uploaded its the first official vlog for the channel. I have done a couple shorter ones but I'm calling this the first episode of my VLOGS. "Seemed like a good idea at the time"
I actually got the topic idea off another YTtalk member, cant remember who, but props to them!
Thanks champ!
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Is the logo design on the monitor behind you green screened?
It's not no, it's literally just my TV screen connected to my computer with the image as my desktop wallpaper
I was surprised how well my camera picked it up without any fuzziness or lines across the screen
JoshstarTV
YTtalks Prankster
Thanks dude will do! I completely agree with everything youve said. Definetly need to be more dynamic and energetic. I'm still really shy even talking into a camera hah
I only just got twitter 2 days ago believe it or not. Registered everything I could in social media etc.
Twitter: JoshstarTV
Web: www.joshstar.tv
Web2: www.joshstar.net
Facebook: www.facebook.com/Joshstar.TV
YouTube: www.youtube.com/JoshstarTV
Have I forgotten anything? Im creating an instagram today but other then that am I missing anything else?[DOUBLEPOST=1411683660,1411683574][/DOUBLEPOST]
It's not no, it's literally just my TV screen connected to my computer with the image as my desktop wallpaper
I was surprised how well my camera picked it up without any fuzziness or lines across the screen
Damn that came out super good! Suprisingly zero flicker, good job mate!