Will you review my channel please :)?

[Bluebear]

Hey guys!
I was just wondering if you could review my channel? By this I mean how can I improve. I have noted errors in my earlier vids and such so no need to mention them :3. Anyway is there anything wrong do you think ? I appreciate the feedback BUT please be kind I was hesitant to make this thread because I am scared of what people could say But please just word your answer nicely is all I'd love to hear what you guys have to say! Thanks for reading

here's a link to one of my videos just so it's easy to get to my channel ^_^ :

 

[Zero]

I recommend a shorter intro as 10 seconds for a mellow start isn't always the best to begin. 5 seconds would be plenty of time to showcase your intro. You can see my intro if you need a little tip on what to do for the short 5 seconds.

Your voice is great and the mic is solid. I see no major flaws other than that intro. Good stuff so far!

 

[Bluebear]

I recommend a shorter intro as 10 seconds for a mellow start isn't always the best to begin. 5 seconds would be plenty of time to showcase your intro. You can see my intro if you need a little tip on what to do for the short 5 seconds.

Your voice is great and the mic is solid. I see no major flaws other than that intro. Good stuff so far!

Hello ! thanks for the tip I will think about shortening the intro ^_^[DOUBLEPOST=1375512025,1375493610][/DOUBLEPOST]

I recommend a shorter intro as 10 seconds for a mellow start isn't always the best to begin. 5 seconds would be plenty of time to showcase your intro. You can see my intro if you need a little tip on what to do for the short 5 seconds.

Your voice is great and the mic is solid. I see no major flaws other than that intro. Good stuff so far!

Okay so it took me hours BUT i managed to redo my logo (i wanted to anyway) and remake my intro i will use it after 1-2 more vids with the old one also i took about 5-4 seconds off