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Hi! I'd love for a review of my channel! So far I've been posting random stuff for a while, but recently I found a formula that I like. If you check it out, the videos about me talking about my life stories (Newly named Tales of Timmotay with my latest video) with the drawn pictures are the ones that represent me the most and are now my main focus. Hopefully you enjoy my channel and thanks for the opportunity!

Also, what genre do you think my channel would fit in based on my videos?
Pros
o Your latest video is really good! Good thumbnail, very nice edited, good humor, interesting story and facts! (very premium!9)
o You got loads of humor (that I love)
o You're a good commentator, a good script writer and actor! (I can't actually tell if you're reading from a script or just improvising)

Improvements
o Take time to make a good thumbnail like you did on your latest video
o Make sure to end your series that you start and not just start a whole bunch with just one episode!

OVERALL: 8/10 You need more content, that's all really! I'm not worried it will be bad content so just go for it! :) Also I would put your channel into life and sketch themed channel! if that makes sense! xD[DOUBLEPOST=1452619854,1452617362][/DOUBLEPOST]
Sure, I could always use some feedback! Please don't feel the need to sugar coat things, I can take criticism.
Pros
o Nice avatar and banner
o Good thumbnails
o Good commentary
o Nice video and sound quality

Improvements
o Make sure to put your videos and series into playlists it helps both new and old subs to see what series you've done in the past!
o Think about what you say, don't swear so much! (maybe just my opinion)
o Shorten your videos, I saw one that was 1 hour! Try edit it down so it's watchable!

OVERALL: 8.5/10 Just keep up the good video production and you'll get far! :) I mean you've come this far already! :D Good luck![DOUBLEPOST=1452620763][/DOUBLEPOST]
I'd enjoy a review! But I want to make note a a couple things.
1: I know my banner and logo do not match, but people have told me it is not an issue really.
2:I know my audio in my channel trailer is, not optimal, but I just recently got a new mic so only the most recent videos have goo-great audi and a new one will be made eventually.
3: I recognise the length of my videos, whenI start making videos beyond the genre od single-player story-mode, it'll be a bit better, but I like immersion in story-reliant games.
4: I also know my intro is long, it is kind of a representation of my videos though and I feel like it is not too repetative.
Pros
o Really good commentary! (I look up to you now! xD)
o Good video quality
o Plenty of info on the "About" tab

Improvements
o Try shorten down the videos even more! :P
o I don't know if you actually have a lisp or if it's your mic! But anyhow, you should try and train away the lisp!

OVERALL: 9/10 Just fix the stuff you said yourself and you'll go far! Keep it up and good luck! :D[DOUBLEPOST=1452621588][/DOUBLEPOST]
I would appreciate some feedback! Anything helps! Just want to know how our content stands :)
I saw you got some feedback already so I'll just go with a short overall review!

OVERALL: 5/10 It's really a channel in it's early stages but I really see potential in it due to the fact that your commentary is splendid! Banner and Avatar needs a rework though, it's not really that good! Also your thumbnails can be improved and make sure you make unique thumbnails for every episode in a series so the viewers get the feeling they can't miss out on an episode! Other than that just keep it up and good luck! :)
 
Pros
o Your latest video is really good! Good thumbnail, very nice edited, good humor, interesting story and facts! (very premium!9)
o You got loads of humor (that I love)
o You're a good commentator, a good script writer and actor! (I can't actually tell if you're reading from a script or just improvising)

Improvements
o Take time to make a good thumbnail like you did on your latest video
o Make sure to end your series that you start and not just start a whole bunch with just one episode!

OVERALL: 8/10 You need more content, that's all really! I'm not worried it will be bad content so just go for it! :) Also I would put your channel into life and sketch themed channel! if that makes sense! xD

Hey, thanks for the input dude! I actually do write a script! I can't come up with that funny stuff on the spot unfortunately. It would sure make the video making process faster though! haha.
 
Hey could you check out my channel, for some odd reason im having problems with the link to my channel but here is one of my videos thanks, I'm just starting so I'd like some feed back.
 
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