What do you think......?

[iCrossbowMan]

Hey guys I was just wondering if you could give me your opinion on my latest Minecraft Youtube Video.
I am playing on a very interesting Modpack called Sky Factory, and I want to spread the word of Sky Factory!

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[MiketheDbacker26]

I thought your video was good, definitely had good commentary! You were able to keep me interested for the entire video, which is really important. Keep up the good work!

 

[Nithlus]

Your video was entertaining and you where able to keep me interested all the way through.

Things i think could be improved on would be to have an intro graphic and maybe an improved outro.