What do you guys think of my first youtube intro?

I don't like it. Sorry, but I'm being honest.

It's way too long.

I didn't even finish watching it.

It's too repetitive and the transitions are abrupt and disconnected.

The worst parts are the random cell phone side video shots.

I'd suggest you not use that at all and make another one.
 
Same as above sorry man,

Intros for youtube should always be around 3-10 secs max. Maybe up to 15 seconds for a vlog channel.

@CatsRants Her intro is quite long but it is well made and interesting enough.

And yea Mobile video is not that great for videos, unless its extremely neccary. Or you have a idea how to improve it.
 
yea i like it but it is FAR FAR FAR too long! if i have to watch 32 seconds of intro everytime i want to watch a video of you i would be bored! i hate to say it because you put a lot of afford in it but really... shorten it up
 
Just echoing the same opinion as everyone else - an intro should be 10 seconds MAX, somewhere around 3-5 seconds is best.

Almost none of those things shown in your intro have anything to do with YOU! An intro should be something that clearly says "you're about to watch one of my videos." I don't feel that your intro reflects that.
 
Lilikoi Juice said:
I don't like it. Sorry, but I'm being honest.

It's way too long.

I didn't even finish watching it.

It's too repetitive and the transitions are abrupt and disconnected.

The worst parts are the random cell phone side video shots.

I'd suggest you not use that at all and make another one.
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thanks for the feedback I'll try to do better on my next one[DOUBLEPOST=1387177965,1387177935][/DOUBLEPOST]
AnnaLovesVlogging said:
Just echoing the same opinion as everyone else - an intro should be 10 seconds MAX, somewhere around 3-5 seconds is best.

Almost none of those things shown in your intro have anything to do with YOU! An intro should be something that clearly says "you're about to watch one of my videos." I don't feel that your intro reflects that.
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thanks for the feedback I'll try to do better on my next one
 
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