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JellyFlavoured

JellyFlavoured

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Go on, give me your criticisms! But try be helpful please, I don't want replies like 'you suck', but 'you suck at /this/, so try improve on /blah blah blah/' :3 It's all a learning experience so go on!

Here's my latest video for reference, since the audio has been way improved on since the first episodes. :3

 
Well you don't suck, so that's good. I don't really like vampires and stuff so it was ahard to guage how exciting you are as a commentator. You speak clearly and there isn't a lot of quiet time which is good, I would consider reading some books aloud to yourself as practice so you can read the screen text in a more characterful way, I love that you read the screen text, I hate when people don't.

Are you new to this? If so you are going to improve naturally over time to the point where you won't recognise yourself, think about sjin fromnyogs cast he is a new man these days
 
I know that i do this sometimes were i try to sound excited but i keep my voice at a lower tone for audio reasons but i think the louder freak-outs and reactions are better and you can fix anything too sharp in post with audacity. I think there is a lot of good stuff here, you speak clearly and with a little bit of an British ascent and that's always fun.

Keep working at it!
 
coliwob said:
Well you don't suck, so that's good. I don't really like vampires and stuff so it was ahard to guage how exciting you are as a commentator. You speak clearly and there isn't a lot of quiet time which is good, I would consider reading some books aloud to yourself as practice so you can read the screen text in a more characterful way, I love that you read the screen text, I hate when people don't.

Are you new to this? If so you are going to improve naturally over time to the point where you won't recognise yourself, think about sjin fromnyogs cast he is a new man these days
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Thank you very much for your kind words! I don't really think I had much going actually it's pretty hard to just keep talking non-stop.

Yes! I am new to this. I started about a week ago in fact. C:[DOUBLEPOST=1390407514,1390407221][/DOUBLEPOST]
thefedoranerd said:
I know that i do this sometimes were i try to sound excited but i keep my voice at a lower tone for audio reasons but i think the louder freak-outs and reactions are better and you can fix anything too sharp in post with audacity. I think there is a lot of good stuff here, you speak clearly and with a little bit of an British ascent and that's always fun.

Keep working at it!
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Oh, the reason I try keep my voice a lower tone isn't for the mic, it's because I have 4 other flatmates and I record very late at night. [I edit the next day, though I'm still trying to figure out audacity so it's not so much editing as it is fiddling around with the settings] They've told me off a couple of times already for being loud haha, I think I'll have to consider recording earlier during the day if I find some time.

As for the British accent it's not intentional I assure you >_> Since I moved to the UK for university it seems to have made my already British-y accent worse. I'm certain if you listen closely you can still hear bits of my old hometown's accent. ^_^;;

Thanks for the support!
 
JellyFlavoured said:
Thank you very much for your kind words! I don't really think I had much going actually it's pretty hard to just keep talking non-stop.

Yes! I am new to this. I started about a week ago in fact. C:[DOUBLEPOST=1390407514,1390407221][/DOUBLEPOST]

Oh, the reason I try keep my voice a lower tone isn't for the mic, it's because I have 4 other flatmates and I record very late at night. [I edit the next day, though I'm still trying to figure out audacity so it's not so much editing as it is fiddling around with the settings] They've told me off a couple of times already for being loud haha, I think I'll have to consider recording earlier during the day if I find some time.

As for the British accent it's not intentional I assure you >_> Since I moved to the UK for university it seems to have made my already British-y accent worse. I'm certain if you listen closely you can still hear bits of my old hometown's accent. ^_^;;

Thanks for the support!
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I think the accent is a plus lol
 
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