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realspeed said:
Yeah I'm down throw me under the bus
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The blue on your banner clashes a bit but overall the banner does its job and looks decent. Avatar looks fine.

You need some custom thumbs. Seems like your channel is one of those 'everything goes' channels, so use it to your advantage. Take a great screen cap from the video in question, give it a title. Otherwise your video, in a search might just be 'oh look a phone video, how boring'. Draw attention to yourself! :)

Only gripe is that for one video you posted a scantily clad chick on a bike, who didn't appear in the video. I am gonna guess that's mostly why you had to disable ratings on that. Rule number 1 - don't be 'fake', people WILL call you out on it.

Playlists and whatnot looks fine. Titles are descriptive.[DOUBLEPOST=1375702858,1375702619][/DOUBLEPOST]
Agent00 said:
I'd love a review if you have the time. Be as harsh as you can.
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Yo momma so fat... oh crap you meant the videos, right... ;)

I like your banner! The title words look faded, I think I would've liked them a bit more prominent, personally but that's just me. Good avatar, nice custom thumbs and the titles do their job nicely.

I actually like your commentary! Clear, confident and you really sound like you're comfortable doing it. Nothing worse than someone who sounds like they want to fold in on themselves in a video. I really like your hook 'I'm the double agent you guys can trust', that's catchy and kinda funny!

... damn you got off easy! :giggle: must make up for it. Where did you get your suit? The toilet store?
 
Frankie said:
The blue on your banner clashes a bit but overall the banner does its job and looks decent. Avatar looks fine.

You need some custom thumbs. Seems like your channel is one of those 'everything goes' channels, so use it to your advantage. Take a great screen cap from the video in question, give it a title. Otherwise your video, in a search might just be 'oh look a phone video, how boring'. Draw attention to yourself! :)

Only gripe is that for one video you posted a scantily clad chick on a bike, who didn't appear in the video. I am gonna guess that's mostly why you had to disable ratings on that. Rule number 1 - don't be 'fake', people WILL call you out on it.

Playlists and whatnot looks fine. Titles are descriptive.
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Thank You Very Much, lol but most my video are phone videos
 
You can give mine a go over, though my last vid was a couple of months ago, looking into doing more soon when I have some more spare time.
 
Frankie said:
The first thing I noticed is that your banner is completely the wrong size. The text doesn't fit on the screen without me intentionally 'full screening' my page, which I don't want to do whenever I go on your channel. Download the OneChannel guideline template and be sure to keep all forefront text/images within the borders, bearing in mind where your avatar and any channel links will go.

As I said to Katherine001 -- lose the external playlists (especially on yours, since they DOMINATE your entire front page). They do nothing to help your channel. Take them off, and put your own playlists there, for YOUR content. All you're doing is driving people away with it.

Uploads are a tad inconsistent. Try to upload weekly or if that's too often at least bi-weekly. If you're a smaller channel it's so easy for people to forget you exist in the space of four weeks if you forget to upload anything.

Custom Thumbs look fine, titles do their job. No complaints there.
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Thank you :D
I used a template, It looks fine to me, Im confused haha, Ill check it again :)
 
Frankie said:
The blue on your banner clashes a bit but overall the banner does its job and looks decent. Avatar looks fine.

You need some custom thumbs. Seems like your channel is one of those 'everything goes' channels, so use it to your advantage. Take a great screen cap from the video in question, give it a title. Otherwise your video, in a search might just be 'oh look a phone video, how boring'. Draw attention to yourself! :)

Only gripe is that for one video you posted a scantily clad chick on a bike, who didn't appear in the video. I am gonna guess that's mostly why you had to disable ratings on that. Rule number 1 - don't be 'fake', people WILL call you out on it.

Playlists and whatnot looks fine. Titles are descriptive.[DOUBLEPOST=1375702858,1375702619][/DOUBLEPOST]


Yo momma so fat... oh crap you meant the videos, right... ;)

I like your banner! The title words look faded, I think I would've liked them a bit more prominent, personally but that's just me. Good avatar, nice custom thumbs and the titles do their job nicely.

I actually like your commentary! Clear, confident and you really sound like you're comfortable doing it. Nothing worse than someone who sounds like they want to fold in on themselves in a video. I really like your hook 'I'm the double agent you guys can trust', that's catchy and kinda funny!

... damn you got off easy! :giggle: must make up for it. Where did you get your suit? The toilet store?
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LOOL. My first laugh of the day :) Thanks for the feedback :D
 
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