Updated channel review perhaps?

[BrittClark]

Hola !!!
so I began little over month ago and am sitting around 146 subscribers now.

I haven't got that many videos up but I have changed A LOT since my last channel review
Any advice would be helpful

(View through video down below plz) ​

 

[CaptainDelugo]

I'm not an expert at the kinda thing you're doing but I'll just review what I can
The commentary is loud and fluent, your cuts made in the video are well-placed and keeps the video going which is nice.
Your banner is simple but nice! So is the avatar!
Audio and video quality is perfect!
The music used as background is typical but its fitting!
You're also making the videos quite amusing, which is needed for your channel as you should be the main reason why people should watch your vids!

Overall I'd rate this pretty good, not sure if you could trust me though as I don't usually watch these kinda videos

 

[BrittClark]

I'm not an expert at the kinda thing you're doing but I'll just review what I can
The commentary is loud and fluent, your cuts made in the video are well-placed and keeps the video going which is nice.
Your banner is simple but nice! So is the avatar!
Audio and video quality is perfect!
The music used as background is typical but its fitting!
You're also making the videos quite amusing, which is needed for your channel as you should be the main reason why people should watch your vids!

Overall I'd rate this pretty good, not sure if you could trust me though as I don't usually watch these kinda videos

Thanks for this it was very helpful !! I feel like I have improved in a month based on your review !

 

[Mauricio]

I watched your first and latest video and you have improved a lot. You seem more comfortable in front of the camera and the lighting is way better. You have gotten quite of but of subcribers in a short amount of time which means you are doing something right.