TheRedTieGuy
I've Got It
Greetings YTtalk Forums people! Recently I introduced myself in the Introduction section, so head on over there and have a look if you want to know a bit about me.
Link: http://yttalk.com/threads/greetings-from-cape-town-south-africa.124178/
Recently I created an introduction to my Channel, which basically breaks down what my Channel is about:
The Good:
What did you enjoy about the Introduction and my Channel and what do you think I should focus on more?
The Bad:
Well, there isn't an easy way to say this - what did you dislike? What should I remove or drastically change?
The Ugly:
What should I improve upon? Was there certain aspects that just didn't match?
Honesty is much appreciated - any criticism is good criticism. I do this channel for fun and because I enjoy making it. It is the biggest reason why I started it in the first place.
My camera quality will increase as I recently acquired a new camera. Speaking up and clearly is something I'm improving on and after my Exams, I'll produce much more content. I'd like to thank you in advance for taking the time in looking at my Intro and Channel.
Link: http://yttalk.com/threads/greetings-from-cape-town-south-africa.124178/
Recently I created an introduction to my Channel, which basically breaks down what my Channel is about:
The Good:
What did you enjoy about the Introduction and my Channel and what do you think I should focus on more?
The Bad:
Well, there isn't an easy way to say this - what did you dislike? What should I remove or drastically change?
The Ugly:
What should I improve upon? Was there certain aspects that just didn't match?
Honesty is much appreciated - any criticism is good criticism. I do this channel for fun and because I enjoy making it. It is the biggest reason why I started it in the first place.
My camera quality will increase as I recently acquired a new camera. Speaking up and clearly is something I'm improving on and after my Exams, I'll produce much more content. I'd like to thank you in advance for taking the time in looking at my Intro and Channel.

In saying that, I like your unboxings though.
I enjoyed your Channel Intro - it's short, to the point and not all over the place. I've seen so many people that have 3-5-10 minute channel trailers and honestly, you want to keep it shorter than 1:30 max. The same with actual video intro's. You don't want to sit through 30 seconds before the video begins....