Summer Work Gone Wrong(Vlog)
- Thread starter czikor
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Pim
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Hey Tricried,
Going to be extremely constructive here, i felt like it was a tad long. You know how to edit so just make it a bit shorter. Dial back an the curse words don't think it fits you. Apart from that i did not dislike. I don't really watch allot of vlogs because they tend to have nothing happen. Maybe you could try to make it more dynamic. for example if you are talking about the city that you live in point the camera outside and show it. If you are talking about certain buildings then show them. Stuff like that.
Anyway hope that helps.
Going to be extremely constructive here, i felt like it was a tad long. You know how to edit so just make it a bit shorter. Dial back an the curse words don't think it fits you. Apart from that i did not dislike. I don't really watch allot of vlogs because they tend to have nothing happen. Maybe you could try to make it more dynamic. for example if you are talking about the city that you live in point the camera outside and show it. If you are talking about certain buildings then show them. Stuff like that.
Anyway hope that helps.
Thanks for the feedback!
I felt the same way with the length, but I was afraid the story would come throught well enough if i would have chopped it down further.
I would show the city, but I live in another city, not where the story takes place.
But thank you anyway, I'm going to try to not curse so much
I felt the same way with the length, but I was afraid the story would come throught well enough if i would have chopped it down further.
I would show the city, but I live in another city, not where the story takes place.
But thank you anyway, I'm going to try to not curse so much