Suggestions/criticism on my current outro?

[WillyPapafry]

This is my current outro and where it says "Next Video" I will have a preview of my next video playing with music behind the outro, the video will be muted, any criticism or suggestions?

 

[SEMilfred]

Honestly I think it is harsh to look at. However you show the most important stuff, and at least people can focus on the preview video with relative ease Maybe an a little duller background color and another font?

 

[WillyPapafry]

What do you recommend as a background color? Dark red?

 

[SEMilfred]

Maybe, and then a bold white for your text, to compliment your logo/subscribe-area?
Or alternatively go completely, simplistically black for the background

 

[WillyPapafry]

Updated one[DOUBLEPOST=1405189260,1405189204][/DOUBLEPOST]oops didn't upload it haha[DOUBLEPOST=1405189534][/DOUBLEPOST]Here it is!

 

[Kath]

Just moving this to the Reviews & Channel feedback section of the forum for you...as all reviews go there

 

[WillyPapafry]

Thanks! I wasn't 100% sure where this went

 

[SEMilfred]

I like the new one way better ^^

 

[WillyPapafry]

Thanks it's the one I am going with until I can make a better one on the side