Starting youtuber needs feedback!

[MonkeyHorse]

Hi! I have just started a YouTube channel and uploaded my first video, it would be really awesome if someone could give me a feedback!
Here's The link tot my channel

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UC1BJHfwCt6r2za-EB8T7eCQ

 

[wufu]

I saw your first video and it was't bad for a first video. I would suggest eventually getting a better mic. Your video time seems pretty good.