WilliamArisFederman
Active Member
So I am a youtuber, duh, and I usually have great improv skills. I don't ever script things. This is my first video that I use a script. I would like some feedback if that is okay. Thanks so much guys!
Someone Review my Video :D ?
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ItsJustSteph
Loving YTtalk
I thought id be able to tell that you were using a script...but in all honesty i cant. I think its a good video. audio is clear, at times i thought it was a bit quiet. But other than that. Seemed fine to me 
WilliamArisFederman
Active Member
Okay, I will try to up the volume![DOUBLEPOST=1407256287,1407256265][/DOUBLEPOST]I thought id be able to tell that you were using a script...but in all honesty i cant. I think its a good video. audio is clear, at times i thought it was a bit quiet. But other than that. Seemed fine to me
Okay, I will lower the background music.
Soul Hyorinmaru
I've Got It
amazing with the scripted, but lower background music
WilliamArisFederman
Active Member
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Okay! Thanks!
intro designer
Well-Known Member
Hey, this is very good in my opinion. You are very fluent (doesn't sound like a script) and you inform quickly and to the point. One thing I would improve on is branding. The intro is (sorry to say, don't be offended!) subpar, and I think you should have a call to action (such as a subscribe thumbnail) so people can keep watching your videos. Hope this helped
Molitor
YTtalk Mad
Definitely lower the background music. You sound fine scripted! You speak/read well and you don't do it monotonously. I would just recommend possibly reading it over a few more times before hand as there are one or two times that you slip up a bit and it becomes more apparent that you are reading a script from my point of view knowing you have one; but I think it wouldn't be noticed without knowing it was a script beforehand.