Some Feedback on latest Video

[THEJawuzzah24]

Hey I am just looking for some good, and back feedback on my latest video, if you could watch it tell me what you liked and didn't like about it. I would more than appreciate it. Thank you!

 

[Ninja]

Editing is decent, the intro is a bit long, maybe speed it up a few seconds or have the name disappear a bit earlier. There was a small bit of black space between the start and finish of your intro, just double check that you have a transition there or that the clips are directly beside on another. The one big problem was that your voice echoed a little bit at some points, and your friend's voice was barely there, and whenever he talked the music would overpower him. Other than that, the thumbnail is good, intro is good for a start, outro looks nice and the humor was pretty good. Just work on your audio leveling and editing a little bit and you will be golden!