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[XIIREX]

Not bad man! You have HD footage, with good content and fun music. I liked how you did some cool transitions on some of the harder hits of the music. It worked really well and made it more impactful. Just a couple of notes. When you are doing montages... or anything with background music. Try your best to cut on the beat of the music. It makes a seamless transition and makes watching the video so much more smooth. You did this for the bigger hits. But the smaller cuts were just cut at the end of the clip isntead of synced up with the beat. If you did that I think it'd be awesome!

Also like the last person, when I click your channel it directs me to your channel feed, not your uploaded videos. Yours is set up to only show your uploads but if you direct your viewers to your upload page it'll be more organized.

Keep up the good work!



Not a problem man. I'll look at commentary and give feedback as needed. It's just not my go to genre xD. Anyways, first off that is a lot of cut scenes! lol. So here were some notes that I took down watching your video. You have a very cool intro. Definitely would hook the viewer early on which is a very good thing to have. Your audio is crisp and well balanced between game and voice over. To be honest I think you could boost your game audio a tad even. Since you have a good sounding mic you have some room to work with.

As for the music, I think it is used well. Typically when you set up a character it takes a while and can be boring for the viewer but you changed it up with the timelapse and catchy music. Very well done. As for the levels of it I think it works just fine. I did not have to adjust my levels at all while watching.

The only thing I can really suggest for bettering your video would be an outro slate directing your viewers to your other videos. Good channel man! Keep up the good work.

Thank you for your feedback! Much appreciated. I will use your tips for my next montage : )
Also I wanna say that you are doing a really good job on helping other with these thread!

 

[PressRecord]

Thank you for your feedback! Much appreciated. I will use your tips for my next montage : )
Also I wanna say that you are doing a really good job on helping other with these thread!

Thank you so much. I miss partner training. It was always the highlight of my week helping people pursue their dreams and such. So although this isn't the same as what I did it is still fun for me =)

 

[rosie]

I know how that is. I've been there! First off I love your voice. I could see you doing voice over stuff. As for content I think it was done well, it was funny and it wasn't too long. You had your outro branding with a call to action and you can tell you put time into it =) . There are two things I think you could do to spice it up a tad though. If you add some background music behind your video it could help pace it quicker. Even though it's only 2 minutes you still want it to feel seamless and as nicely paced as possible.

Second thing is at 1:05 you cut from you handing money to you receiving money both at the same angle. Although you changed shirts it hits hard and was kinda confusing at first. I had to actually play that part back to understand it fully. So when you are doing dialogue shots make sure that they are both different angles if you want the best cinematic result =)

I hope this helped! I can see you doing really well with this!

Also one other note. When I click on your channel it takes me to your channel feed, not your channel videos. If you want the people visiting your channel to find your videos you need to change your settings so that your videos are featured instead of the videos you liked and commented on.

thank you!! i really appreciate any feedback, and this was really helpful and not flame-y

 

[Fruitsniffer]

Not a problem man. I'll look at commentary and give feedback as needed. It's just not my go to genre xD. Anyways, first off that is a lot of cut scenes! lol. So here were some notes that I took down watching your video. You have a very cool intro. Definitely would hook the viewer early on which is a very good thing to have. Your audio is crisp and well balanced between game and voice over. To be honest I think you could boost your game audio a tad even. Since you have a good sounding mic you have some room to work with.

As for the music, I think it is used well. Typically when you set up a character it takes a while and can be boring for the viewer but you changed it up with the timelapse and catchy music. Very well done. As for the levels of it I think it works just fine. I did not have to adjust my levels at all while watching.

The only thing I can really suggest for bettering your video would be an outro slate directing your viewers to your other videos. Good channel man! Keep up the good work.

Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it. I'll increase the game volume a bit and then get to editing the next episode. :3

About the outro: I will think about it. I used to have one but dropped it again at some point (because of reasons that are unknown to myself .-.).

I feel a lot more confident now. Thank you, again. ^^

 

[PressRecord]

thank you!! i really appreciate any feedback, and this was really helpful and not flame-y

Good I'm glad. Everyone needs feedback on their videos in order to grow! Your channel is great and you'll do well. Just stick to it =)[DOUBLEPOST=1381259166,1381259096][/DOUBLEPOST]

Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it. I'll increase the game volume a bit and then get to editing the next episode. :3

About the outro: I will think about it. I used to have one but dropped it again at some point (because of reasons that are unknown to myself .-.).

I feel a lot more confident now. Thank you, again. ^^

The game volume is not necessarily important, I think it is good as is. But if you want you can boost it a bit more and be fine! =) And I'm glad it helped man. Good luck with everything!

 

[Gamer Dad]

Wow you are really helping a lot of people out here! Thank you for doing that proactively!

Would you mind taking a look at my recent attempt at a FAIL Video? It is The Gamer Dad FAILS BF4 on my channel, posted today.

Thank you in advance - any other feedback is always appreciated, been doing this for a little over a month now

 

[PressRecord]

Wow you are really helping a lot of people out here! Thank you for doing that proactively!

Would you mind taking a look at my recent attempt at a FAIL Video? It is The Gamer Dad FAILS BF4 on my channel, posted today.

Thank you in advance - any other feedback is always appreciated, been doing this for a little over a month now

lol cool stuff man. This is a very unique addition to the gaming community. When it comes to gaming videos I always tell people that they need to be as original and different as possible in order to stand out and you are doing that! You have funny material with a unique concept, good sounding audio and good looking picture. I think you have something going for you there! My only recommendation is that you might want to turn down your sound effects. Although they are funny they are a little loud. I was listening to your video through headphones and you could tell an audio change.

Besides that you're doing great man!

 

[Gamer Dad]

lol cool stuff man. This is a very unique addition to the gaming community. When it comes to gaming videos I always tell people that they need to be as original and different as possible in order to stand out and you are doing that! You have funny material with a unique concept, good sounding audio and good looking picture. I think you have something going for you there! My only recommendation is that you might want to turn down your sound effects. Although they are funny they are a little loud. I was listening to your video through headphones and you could tell an audio change.

Besides that you're doing great man!

Dude you're a rockstar! Thank you for #1, taking the time to watch the video and #2 providing quality feedback and encouragement. Keep doing what you are doing man! It's extremely helpful!

 

[PressRecord]

Dude you're a rockstar! Thank you for #1, taking the time to watch the video and #2 providing quality feedback and encouragement. Keep doing what you are doing man! It's extremely helpful!

Not going to lie I watched it all the way through. It was honestly entertaining xD I subscribed to see where you take it! And thank you I'm glad it's paying off =)

 

[Slowlist]

What's up everyone? I used to run a show on TGN called Pimp My Channel where we would watch peoples videos, check out their channels and give them feedback. It was a lot of fun and I miss doing it. It was always exciting seeing new talent come to life. So tonight I want to bring it back. It won't be in the form of a stream so it won't give you any promotional benefits but maybe I can give you some feedback that could help give you promotion down the line.

Anyways if you have something you want for me to check out post your video title that you'd like me to check out and I'll watch it and let you know what I think.

PS. Commentary is alright to share but my preference is anything but commentary. I'll even check out makeup tutorials xD.

Let's see what you guys have =)

Dionite Films

Wow this sounds awesome The video is top 5 dumbest its in the my sig! Thanks in advance if you review it!