Say What's good and bad about this Video

[HyDraid]

I just uploaded this video and I want some opinions...
So I can improve on making better Video's / Editing...
Just say what's good and bad, I just want to know because people of my own country just don't like them...
And I don't know why... So maybe you can give some tips ?

 

[injusticeexpert7]

well I like the intro its quite good did you make it yourself