Lol I wasnt tlking about my channelThis can go in the reviews section.
Anyway, onto the actual points of improvement (video in your signature)
To start of the audio from your intro is much louder than the content audio, balancing the audio is very important!
I like the text and the pictures you put on there, it makes it more interesting
I mean other than the audio thing I don't see much to improve on. It looks pretty standard =P
Then I realised this thread is about seeing improvement in my own channel... woops
Anyway. Yes. I do think I can improve.
Lol I wasnt tlking about my channel
Lol yeah but takes for the tipI know, I realised XD
Thatz great always want to improve and get betterI have noticed that I am a lot more confident in front of the camera, meaning the quality of my content is improving greatly. Using better lighting and editing has made my iPhone Quality Video look half decent.
I have noticed a significant improvement in my own eyes, yes![]()
) and I think when I do live commentaries I could speak more 
Yeah live commentaries are a problem for me alsoI think I could improve on my audio (mic problems) and I think when I do live commentaries I could speak more
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I have improved a lot though since my first ones! I think a way to improve in these would be to set a subject at the start of the vid them speak about it in the video so there's no awkward 2 minute silences xDYeah live commentaries are a problem for me also