Review?

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I would like to get this reviewed...anyone?

 

[ForeverAlonePrick]

I think the opening of the video is a bit awkward, as you're just rocking back and forward, looking down for a while. I know what you're going for, but it just doesn't quite work. I'd suggest working more on the editing. Also, your audio of your lyrics don't sound too clear. I'd maybe get a better mic or something. Those are my main points.

 

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I think the opening of the video is a bit awkward, as you're just rocking back and forward, looking down for a while. I know what you're going for, but it just doesn't quite work. I'd suggest working more on the editing. Also, your audio of your lyrics don't sound too clear. I'd maybe get a better mic or something. Those are my main points.

Thanks bro!