Review one of my best videos? :)

[OnixGameplay]

Hello everyone if you wold please do me the honor of reviewing one of my best videos but unfortunatly not the most viewed one

Video belongs in gaming category but you dont have to be a gamer to like it or not to.. The whole point of the video is a car BMW..
Please tell me what do you like about the video and what you dont
Do you like the music? Camera angles? Are the scenes too long?

 

[Alecator]

I mean it's not poorly made, but it's not very interesting. I feel like I'm watching an extended BMW advertisement, and nobody really goes around looking to watch commercials unless it's the Super Bowl. The drift at 0:37 was pretty cool but that's about the only shot I actually enjoyed. The explosion scene didn't fit in much at all with the rest of it. The song gets annoying after a while, and on top of that I'm not sure if you have permission to use it. Finally, this is a GTA4 video. Nobody - I repeat, NOBODY - is looking up GTA4 anymore unless it's to compare it to GTA5. I would strongly consider buying the new game if you're going to be making these videos, and try to record something a little more interesting than you driving around in an average car to some house music.

 

[OnixGameplay]

I mean it's not poorly made, but it's not very interesting. I feel like I'm watching an extended BMW advertisement, and nobody really goes around looking to watch commercials unless it's the Super Bowl. The drift at 0:37 was pretty cool but that's about the only shot I actually enjoyed. The explosion scene didn't fit in much at all with the rest of it. The song gets annoying after a while, and on top of that I'm not sure if you have permission to use it. Finally, this is a GTA4 video. Nobody - I repeat, NOBODY - is looking up GTA4 anymore unless it's to compare it to GTA5. I would strongly consider buying the new game if you're going to be making these videos, and try to record something a little more interesting than you driving around in an average car to some house music.

Well this is a car mod review so I am showing how this car mod looks when driving I do have permison for song
I have to wait for gta 5 to come out on pc

Thx for honest reply

 

[Alecator]

Well this is a car mod review

Oh, that makes more sense. Sorry, didn't realize. In that case, I would definitely make it shorter. There's no need to make 3 minutes of yourself doing the same thing over and over. Also, like I said, you'll get a lot more views once you get GTA5. Good luck with everything!

 

[OnixGameplay]

Oh, that makes more sense. Sorry, didn't realize. In that case, I would definitely make it shorter. There's no need to make 3 minutes of yourself doing the same thing over and over. Also, like I said, you'll get a lot more views once you get GTA5. Good luck with everything!

Thank you