Review On My Latest Video

[BenRekt]

Hello,

As the title says, I'm looking for some feedback on a video I made earlier this week. Any constructive criticism and feedback is greatly appreciated and I hope that the video isn't too clingy.

Here's the video:

Thank you if you've managed to read this far. Like I said, any feedback is much appreciated.

 

[TheRealRevolver]

Alright so I can already tell that the comedy is there in your vid, so I'll keep this brief. Your video is well made and it's made in a way that never has a dull moment, however I feel like you were a little excessive in your adding of text. A little I feel is fine but you really layered it on too much I think. I'm an extremely small channel just starting out, my opinion is coming from a viewers prospective. So take it as you will, keep up the good work though and I hope this helped.

 

[BenRekt]

Alright so I can already tell that the comedy is there in your vid, so I'll keep this brief. Your video is well made and it's made in a way that never has a dull moment, however I feel like you were a little excessive in your adding of text. A little I feel is fine but you really layered it on too much I think. I'm an extremely small channel just starting out, my opinion is coming from a viewers prospective. So take it as you will, keep up the good work though and I hope this helped.

Thanks a lot for taking the time to give me some feedback, and I'll definitely take your opinion into consideration when I edit my other content. Even I can see why any normal person would believe that my subtitles could get to be a little excessive x).

 

[Muffyns]

Good job! The video was fun to watch and edited in a way so that there is never a quiet/dull moment which keeps the pace up
The only thing that really bothered me was the feedback that one could sometimes hear from one of the players, which has nothing to do with the video itself but still.

But conlusion, good job!

 

[MusicForTheDay]

Pretty good, the subtitles are a nice addition but small text would be better
I think your vocal audio could be crisper. Your vids are in HD which is great
An end splashscreen with extra links, annotations and social media handles would be a good addition!

If you could review mine in return that would be great I run a channel that features a daily show that highlights free royalty-free music pieces for project/video content creators like yourself! Review of channel art, thumbnails, video format and anything else would be appreciated!

 

[BenRekt]

Good job! The video was fun to watch and edited in a way so that there is never a quiet/dull moment which keeps the pace up
The only thing that really bothered me was the feedback that one could sometimes hear from one of the players, which has nothing to do with the video itself but still.

But conlusion, good job!

Thanks a lot! I spent a lot of time of this video and it's great to know people are liking it.

Pretty good, the subtitles are a nice addition but small text would be better
I think your vocal audio could be crisper. Your vids are in HD which is great
An end splashscreen with extra links, annotations and social media handles would be a good addition!

If you could review mine in return that would be great I run a channel that features a daily show that highlights free royalty-free music pieces for project/video content creators like yourself! Review of channel art, thumbnails, video format and anything else would be appreciated!

Thanks for the feedback, I'll definitely try and fix the audio up next time. I do actually have an end splash screen, but due to the fact that all my previous videos are Minecraft-related (and I really want to move away from Minecraft) I didn't use an end screen this time. I'll now go take a look at some of the stuff you've got and then give you some feedback.