Review on my First video/vlog

[Hellomynameis..]

Hello Humans!
I just posted my first video + vlog.
constructive criticism would be super helpful
Thanks a lot!

 

[coliwob]

It was pretty good, it looked great - I really liked the TV screen thing you were doing although it did get annoying after a while, maybe you should work it into an intro or something.

You come across very well and if you have a story behind you I reckon you'll find yourself some followers.