Review Of My Channel?

hey guys, i have some more videos up.. i took your suggestions and went with them.. i hope they improved the quality of my videos.
 
Checked out your Impossible moments of 2016 and I have to say that you have improved a lot already. The edits are more snappy and I like the new intro and outro sequence, much better than the other video but they still require more work. Some of the edits into the clips for your points cut off what you were saying. Into Harambe and Trump I can hear you still talking and the audio fades so you will have to do the cuts either before or after.
Your commentary is better and I can tell you are feeling more confident in front of the camera. Some of the jokes didn't work for me but hey to each their own! One last thing is the position of yourself in the shot. I am not sure if you are aware of shot composition but the top of your heard is off screen often and that is distracting.
Other than that I would say very well done and continue to improve!
 
Hey,
So you have a good on-air personality and it shows in your videos. You seem to be connecting with your viewers which is a must. You already know you could use better quality video production but you're not letting that stop you so good job. I would recommend fiverr.com to make you a simple intro for about 5 dollars. Also, check out the website called canva.com, there you can do some pretty cool stuff. I would also suggest that you shorten the length of the video for at least the Top 5 Impossible moments of 2016. Your personality shows through which makes you genuine. Keep up the work and refine your craft!

Axiom Brevity
 
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