Review of Gaming Vid and of Channel (art, bio, etc)

TheRealRevolver

TheRealRevolver

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Hi, I'm TheRealRevolver! Ive recently joined the YouTube game and as such I require some feedback on how to improve my quality and entertainment value. I would like this video reviewed as well as my channel. In the video I would like overall quality and entertainment value to be reviewed and my channel art, banner, and just how my channel is presented. Any help would be greatly appreciated, dont hold back please I need to know how my videos are being presented. PS as a side note, I know my friend had the mike to close to his face please bear through that! Thank you all for helping!
 
I think that you're channel art and thumbnails can be improved - for me it just doesn't pop out and say CLICK ME CLICK ME. Some of the red pieces of text don't really work well with the thumbnail background. However using groups of people in videos can make it funnier and generally make you seem a sociable and interact liking guy! Just keep a schedule and you'll do fine[DOUBLEPOST=1441642602,1441641279][/DOUBLEPOST]@TheRealRevolver

If you could give a review for mine in return that would be great :) I have a royalty free music channel for project/video creators :P
 
You might want to consider at least an endplate for your video to give some linkthrough to your other content. I don't think an intro is essential, but it was a bit jarring being thrown straight into the action mid-sentence, so maybe you need so sort of verbal introduction?

Logo is pretty good, but the writing is a little small - it doesn't really 'pop'.
 
Pixels At Dawn said:
You might want to consider at least an endplate for your video to give some linkthrough to your other content. I don't think an intro is essential, but it was a bit jarring being thrown straight into the action mid-sentence, so maybe you need so sort of verbal introduction?

Logo is pretty good, but the writing is a little small - it doesn't really 'pop'.
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I was wondering about verbal introduction to say the music very quickly and call of action reminders

I was intending for an endplate with the social media and subscribe like you've seen. Videos at the shown is a nice idea which I overlooked!

I wanted the logo to be clean and I've found that the composition I have looks good on twitter hence the font sizes - I could play with glows to pop the text more
Many thanks for the feedback :)
 
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Thanks so much for your feed back it means a lot! Yes I know my videos are quite lacking in the editing department but I'll try to work on that moving forward. The thumbnails though I'm not really sure how to make them better than I've made them :/[DOUBLEPOST=1441859695,1441859565][/DOUBLEPOST]
HowHardCanItBeGaming said:
I think that you're channel art and thumbnails can be improved - for me it just doesn't pop out and say CLICK ME CLICK ME. Some of the red pieces of text don't really work well with the thumbnail background. However using groups of people in videos can make it funnier and generally make you seem a sociable and interact liking guy! Just keep a schedule and you'll do fine[DOUBLEPOST=1441642602,1441641279][/DOUBLEPOST]@TheRealRevolver

If you could give a review for mine in return that would be great :) I have a royalty free music channel for project/video creators :p
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Your channel seems pretty good, very vibrant art that says "click me". I'm sorry I can't give more feedback, I think you have a pretty solid channel
 
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