Review needed for a web series

Wentosley

Wentosley

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My friend and I just uploaded our first webisode of an old idea we had. It's called "Mugged". Since it's brand new it can go anywhere and we usually don't script what we do, we just improv and go with it.

What we'd like to have reviewed is whether or not you would:
Watch the second episode and so on if it continues?
Where it would go story-line-wise?
AND
What can be improved?

Here is the link to Mugged, Episode 1:
 
It is actually one of the better sketch series that I have seen over here, but it can be improved. Personally, I'm not too sure about the decision to go with a greyscale filter as it just doesn't seem completely appropriate. It was also a bit overacted, but was perhaps it was intentional? Most of the camera angles were okay, but there were a few too many jump shots while are good in vlogs, are a bit of a shaky technique in films. Otherwise, it was okay, but I'm not completely sure if I'd watch the next episode if there were one. Also while I don't think that everyone does this, but I would sort of expect that you would at least sort of know where the plot was going. Again, it is your first video, so it was pretty good all things considered :D Good luck
 
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