Review my very first video?
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AlbeeTapes
YTtalk Mad
good job on this 
JmyDown
Loving YTtalk
Ha great comedic timing, you seem very relaxed in front of the camera. The only issues I have are technical, the music is too loud and it repeats too often and the hiss of the camera audio is really audible. Run is through Audacity or similar program to remove that noise.
However overall, great first video!
However overall, great first video!
Afterlategaming
Loving YTtalk
I like this! its funny its creative and its educational in a sense.
Maybe quieter music but other than that you seem really comfortable with the camera and thats great carry on and see what happens!
Maybe quieter music but other than that you seem really comfortable with the camera and thats great carry on and see what happens!
Noelle
Nerdy/Writing/Advice Vlogger
Very nice. I quite like this, and currently is relate-able. I have no motivation! HA! xD
I would agree with the music repetition and being too loud. Maybe raise your voice track a bit to you're easily heard. But, before that, remove the roomtone (audio hiss) like JmyDown suggested.
I would agree with the music repetition and being too loud. Maybe raise your voice track a bit to you're easily heard. But, before that, remove the roomtone (audio hiss) like JmyDown suggested.
theAFROtoto
I've Got It
hahaha that was brilliant man i aint no b***h!!!!! -- i plan to scream that anytime i give up something now keep up the great work and seriously i love that opening #DatIntroTho
i aint no b***h!!!!! -- i plan to scream that anytime i give up something now keep up the great work and seriously i love that opening #DatIntroTho
twigboy16
Loving YTtalk
I liked yout first video, great job!! I liked your editing skills, personality and video ideas. Keep up the good work and if there was anything you could change it would be to make your background music play more smoother, because when the music ends, it feels alittle awkward because there's no music xP
Mikeyy
asian persuasion
Oh my gawd! Thank you guys for the amazing feedback!!! It was my first time using Final Cut Pro and I will be sure to cut the music a little bit on my next video! As for the hiss, thank you for pointing that out, it was my first time using the external microphone I just bought . I guess that means I gotta upgrade! Thanks again!
As for the hiss, thank you for pointing that out, it was my first time using the external microphone I just bought . I guess that means I gotta upgrade! Thanks again! 
james leyva
Active Member
You are very natural in front of a camera. I would recommend if you are gonna do the pause move position record thing do it in a bigger room maybe. The room you do it in now looks to small for you to do it amazingly successful but great video