Review my short video? :)

[Crimson]

So, after working on my channel for a while I came up with a series that can let me edit and be creative in a way that I hope is entertaining to watch! It's called Five Minutes at... (I play a game for around an hour and edit it down to 5 minutes), and I was wondering if I could get feedback on my latest episode? I want to know what I can improve to make the series better Thankyou!
The video-

 

[Jawad Soomro]

I think ur talking power is cool
you can put intro for ur videos
maybe you can add some TROLLS or Comic stickers to make it more entertaining?
Your outro is pretty cool maybe add some extra characters to make it more appealing?
All the best

 

[Tifro]

The commentary is cool and i really like the concept of having to get videos finished in a limited time! I think you should add an intro at the beginning of your vids. Also, I don't know whether this would help but maybe you could put like a small timer in either corner of the screen? I guess it would emphasise the fact that you would get the video done in five minutes (not including the outro). This might be useful/useless (because of the youtube timer at the bottom) but it's just something that came to mind?

EDIT: Forgot to mention, liking the thumbnail

Peace, Tifro