review my review
- Thread starter Epiccat
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Jawad Soomro
I'm a Human!
> Your channel banner and Avatar are Cool 8/10
> Your thumbnails need some more love, 6/10
> Your audio quality is ok 5/10
> Editing is awesome 9/10
ALL THE BEST FOR UR CHANNEL
> Your thumbnails need some more love, 6/10
> Your audio quality is ok 5/10
> Editing is awesome 9/10
ALL THE BEST FOR UR CHANNEL
Epiccat
Active Member
thanks for the review! I will take everything and make it all 10/10 (im buying a new mic soon so that may fix it)> Your channel banner and Avatar are Cool 8/10
> Your thumbnails need some more love, 6/10
> Your audio quality is ok 5/10
> Editing is awesome 9/10
ALL THE BEST FOR UR CHANNEL
MiketheDbacker26
Let's Player
The music was a tad bit too loud, and at times felt like it overshadowed your voice. It doesn't need to go down much, but it should be brought down slightly.
I felt like you were very concise with your points, and some of the facts (like the Popeyes bit) was pretty interesting, and is a good grabber for certain people. For a first review, it certainly wasn't bad, I would also work on being more vocal. You spoke with a lack of confidence, and so it made your argument sound weak, even if the points weren't. Say your points like you really believe what you're saying, which is easier if you yourself truly believe it. I think a good next review to work on is a game you like that got "meh" reviews, or a game you hate that got good reviews. It'll be a good exercise since it'll require you to really sell your points in order to make your opinion sound legit. But overall, it's a good start, and you have a good amount of potential!
I felt like you were very concise with your points, and some of the facts (like the Popeyes bit) was pretty interesting, and is a good grabber for certain people. For a first review, it certainly wasn't bad, I would also work on being more vocal. You spoke with a lack of confidence, and so it made your argument sound weak, even if the points weren't. Say your points like you really believe what you're saying, which is easier if you yourself truly believe it. I think a good next review to work on is a game you like that got "meh" reviews, or a game you hate that got good reviews. It'll be a good exercise since it'll require you to really sell your points in order to make your opinion sound legit. But overall, it's a good start, and you have a good amount of potential!