review my new video

[chris paternoster]

just wondered if you you helpfully people could take a look at my new video and let me know what you think and let me know where i can improve
thank you in adavnce

 

[Martyvader]

Hello Chris Paternoster! I love your commentating style! It's a lot of fun to watch. If I had a criticism for the video it would be that it ran way too long. I realize that you were trying to make it a lot like the show, but people watching YouTube videos have really short attention spans. I would cut any filler and slow parts out and maybe tease something interesting at the beginning of the video to entice people to watch further. If you really want to entice people further try adding more content to the video. What I mean by that is try adding a skit at the beginning or outside clips at random. Basically, do what you can to keep people entertained. Even in WWE they cut between actual matches and what is going on backstage. I really like your work so far! Just my two cents! Hope it helped