Review my latest video?

[AshleyisaSuperhero]

Hello there! The latest video on my channel is called "Hop on a train and just go somewhere." It's a travel vlog. I'd love to know what you think...if it was interesting to you, held your attention, and if there is anything I can improve for the next vlog I edit. I plan on making more vlogs in a similar style, but I want to make sure they are engaging and interesting.

Let me know what you think!

 

[OnixGameplay]

Hi Ashley I gave you review in your video comments you will reconise my comment there I am Sweet Sweet Onix
I like specialy the title of the video

 

[roogisan]

That was so cool! It has to be made into a series though, there are just so many things that you could do with it. Maybe focus on meeting some locals and try not to go when the tourist info centre is closed!

 

[LoganReynolds]

That was a good video! And wow, you've been on Youtube for a long time! Incredible commitment to a channel!

Anyways, about your video, just 4 things I'd like to talk about.
1. Music and scenery fits
2. shot beautifully, like an actual documentary
3. for the scenery shots, since you already have overlapping music, it would have been better if you lowered the volume of the original clip as the sound of the air blowing through kinda ruins the whole rather professional vibe you have for the rest of your video.
4. This is more of a personal thing, but I think it would be even better if you can go more in-depth about the locations that you're showing or maybe more commentary with the scenery.

But overall, I'd say very good! Keep up the good work!