Review my first video?

MegoMego

MegoMego

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Yes its my first video it so i'm sure it wont be that great, but i think getting advice right away will help me improve...right? haha



Thanks!
 
Wasn't bad, there was a lot of you not talking but there was a lot of cut scenes and stuff. All in all a good starting point so keep at it, you'll only get better
 
I think your voice was a bit loud and sharp, you cut it by like 25% to 50% but leave the games audio where it is. Try using audacity to normalize your audio so it's not as sharp. In game play videos you don't need to show every moment of the game, you can make cuts as long as you don't cut out big plot points in the game.
 
coliwob said:
Wasn't bad, there was a lot of you not talking but there was a lot of cut scenes and stuff. All in all a good starting point so keep at it, you'll only get better
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Thank you! Yeah, It seems I chose a game with a lot of cut scenes...so next time I will have to pick one where I can talk more in it =v=.[DOUBLEPOST=1390417097,1390417069][/DOUBLEPOST]
thefedoranerd said:
I think your voice was a bit loud and sharp, you cut it by like 25% to 50% but leave the games audio where it is. Try using audacity to normalize your audio so it's not as sharp. In game play videos you don't need to show every moment of the game, you can make cuts as long as you don't cut out big plot points in the game.
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Hmmm true, thanks for the advice!
 
It's a good start, as long as you talk more I think you'll do great. :) just continue to engage your audience
 
I'd actually lower the game audio a little bit, I feel like it merged in with your voice a bit instead of you talking over it.
Overall, not that bad for your first video. We all have to start somewhere, don't we? :)

And you should try to talk a bit more, but you learn to do that as you make more videos.
 
MegoMego said:
Yes its my first video it so i'm sure it wont be that great, but i think getting advice right away will help me improve...right? haha



Thanks!
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good video for your first ever one :) only advice would be that you need to find a good balance of the game audio volume and your voice audio volume :) otherwise great start :D
 
Holy s**t, you've somehow avoided most of the qualities of a s****y LPer. Good job.

-No camcorder - Approved
-No obnoxious humming - Approved
-No Unregistered Hypercam 2 or s****y framerate - Approved
-No dumb a** voices or dumb a** narrations - Approved

Although I'm gonna have to deduct some points for reading on-screen text... well, you didn't do it THAT much.

I'll give you 4.8/5, overall, good work on the first video. Remember, this is coming from someone who really hates LPs, so you've got a good chance if you keep it up.
 
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