Review my editing

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RetroRay

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Hey there,
so this is the first video in which i have done such type of editing.
Some feedback to improve and try to fill in the gaps would be greatly appreciated.
Pls do not mind the title.. of the video.

Regards
Ray
 
Hi Ray!

I have to say i quite liked the video. you seem to have the commentary down to a T. but my only piece of advice would be "Less is More". Your appear to be quite skilled at editing but don't let that go to your head. Try to keep editing to a minimum. over editing videos can ruin them and you have some really good content, i wouldn't want you to ruin it by having some sort of edit every 5 seconds. jump cuts are fine but when it comes to cutting out of the gameplay, try to keep that to a minimum if you have to use it. Also the titles you used, like the "walking" and "sitting simulator" titles at the start of the vid looked a bit amateur, try and change the font and colour to make it look more professional. apart from that your doing well man!
hope i could help

-Ajax
 
AjaxGLHF said:
Hi Ray!

I have to say i quite liked the video. you seem to have the commentary down to a T. but my only piece of advice would be "Less is More". Your appear to be quite skilled at editing but don't let that go to your head. Try to keep editing to a minimum. over editing videos can ruin them and you have some really good content, i wouldn't want you to ruin it by having some sort of edit every 5 seconds. jump cuts are fine but when it comes to cutting out of the gameplay, try to keep that to a minimum if you have to use it. Also the titles you used, like the "walking" and "sitting simulator" titles at the start of the vid looked a bit amateur, try and change the font and colour to make it look more professional. apart from that your doing well man!
hope i could help

-Ajax
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Thanks for the in depth. Will look into these issues and fix them in the next video.
It means a lot that you spent your time to provide this feedback.
Anyways Enjoy Your Day.

Regards
Ray
 
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