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Heyyyy!
So, I really like the IDEA of your channel. I think for your intro, since you do weird and crazy things, you should open with one of the weird things you did, like the challenge you did (was it cinnamon? chili powder?) or you blowing kisses at the camera with makeup! THAT'S what you should open with. I think that the little scenes should go a little faster with the funny moments being the main focus. I liked the milk close up- I found that hilarious. Maybe music that wasn't so chill? I think that it's going to be great you just need to tighten it up a little. Transitions just need to be a little faster! Other than that- I like it :D Has potential!
 
I like it! The one thing I would say is that you seem to have a lot of things that I've seen on a lot of other YouTube channels, so I'd want to know what it is that you offer that other YTers don't. If you do challenges and post silly videos, why is your stuff better or more interesting than anyone else who tries to eat a spoonful of cinnamon or put on makeup for fun? I'm always way more interested in the person behind the content than the content, unless it's something truly spectacular or informative.
 
xingcat said:
I like it! The one thing I would say is that you seem to have a lot of things that I've seen on a lot of other YouTube channels, so I'd want to know what it is that you offer that other YTers don't. If you do challenges and post silly videos, why is your stuff better or more interesting than anyone else who tries to eat a spoonful of cinnamon or put on makeup for fun? I'm always way more interested in the person behind the content than the content, unless it's something truly spectacular or informative.
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CristyTango said:
Heyyyy!
So, I really like the IDEA of your channel. I think for your intro, since you do weird and crazy things, you should open with one of the weird things you did, like the challenge you did (was it cinnamon? chili powder?) or you blowing kisses at the camera with makeup! THAT'S what you should open with. I think that the little scenes should go a little faster with the funny moments being the main focus. I liked the milk close up- I found that hilarious. Maybe music that wasn't so chill? I think that it's going to be great you just need to tighten it up a little. Transitions just need to be a little faster! Other than that- I like it :D Has potential!
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Great feedback, thanks!

I guess my videos do lack personality, perhaps that's a confidence thing!?

Any tips on bringing out personality?
 
Stoobs said:
Great feedback, thanks!

I guess my videos do lack personality, perhaps that's a confidence thing!?

Any tips on bringing out personality?
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I don't think you lack personality at all, I just think you should be YOU, and let your viewers know who you are. It's like you have to heighten yourself just slightly (don't get all scream-y, like a lot of people in videos tend to do) and let us see what makes you laugh, how you think, etc. It's definitely a confidence thing for me. My first videos, I was so wooden, you could have built a diving board off of me.
 
xingcat said:
I don't think you lack personality at all, I just think you should be YOU, and let your viewers know who you are. It's like you have to heighten yourself just slightly (don't get all scream-y, like a lot of people in videos tend to do) and let us see what makes you laugh, how you think, etc. It's definitely a confidence thing for me. My first videos, I was so wooden, you could have built a diving board off of me.
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Yeah? Thanks for the feedback!
Subbed your channel too - I was thinking of growing out my hair! Looks awesome
 
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