Review my channel trailer ! (Or I will NOT cook a romantic dinner just for you and me)

[mavio]

Thanks for checking this out. It's my new channel trailer and It took me a few hours to put together but I am overall satisfied with it. I would love some feedback on it. And I like honest feedback !

Keep making videos guys !

 

[GrgakGames]

Do you really want honest feedback?
Cause I will god damn get that delicious dinner.


Your edits seem really choppy. If this is your first time then that is fine. We all start somewhere.

The edits that you made (which were all horrible memes but whatever your humor compared to mine) were abruptly loud compared to your normal audio.

Your facecam really is choppy and if you cannot have anything of higher quality than I don't think you should have one.

Speak up in your recordings, you are way to rigid it makes the whole video uncomfortable.

If you want some pointers on editing I could try and help although I don't think i'm anything special in that department.

Anyways those are a few things to work on

kiss kiss xoxo I want a nice bowl of Borsht and a tall glass of Kvass that will be my dinner.

 

[mavio]

Do you really want honest feedback?
Cause I will god damn get that delicious dinner.


Your edits seem really choppy. If this is your first time then that is fine. We all start somewhere.

The edits that you made (which were all horrible memes but whatever your humor compared to mine) were abruptly loud compared to your normal audio.

Your facecam really is choppy and if you cannot have anything of higher quality than I don't think you should have one.

Speak up in your recordings, you are way to rigid it makes the whole video uncomfortable.

If you want some pointers on editing I could try and help although I don't think i'm anything special in that department.

Anyways those are a few things to work on

kiss kiss xoxo I want a nice bowl of Borsht and a tall glass of Kvass that will be my dinner.

Yeah I love honest feedback, so no prob the meal is cooking

What do you mean by choppy? Like no transitions between ? It was my first time yes.

Yeah I know I'm rigid but I feel it will go away with time. And I feel better in each video. I will speak up yes I am aware that I have an issue with that. It's in general not only for youtube

What editing improvements would you suggest on this video ?

 

[GrgakGames]

Yeah as in no transitions in between.
For those kind of clips it really REALLY takes away from the video.
Especially for how many there were.

For instances the "why tf you lying" or the stewie griffin "say what"
felt so forced. It's hard to explain. I myself don't do that kind of thing.

One thing I can say on is that when you did the "deal with it" or thug life part
you really should have moved the glasses with your eyes
I think almost any video editing program will do FBF or frame by frame.

Unless it's windows movie maker and if so i'm so sorry.

 

[mavio]

Yeah as in no transitions in between.
For those kind of clips it really REALLY takes away from the video.
Especially for how many there were.

For instances the "why tf you lying" or the stewie griffin "say what"
felt so forced. It's hard to explain. I myself don't do that kind of thing.

One thing I can say on is that when you did the "deal with it" or thug life part
you really should have moved the glasses with your eyes
I think almost any video editing program will do FBF or frame by frame.

Unless it's windows movie maker and if so i'm so sorry.

What type of transitions do you mean ? So you mean the beginning of the video where there is no transitions between the parts makes a bad first impression ?

I find the video funnier with the memes, but there is an issue with the volume differences.

The deal with it part I just said it's not a big deal to move it with my eyes because it's only two seconds. I didn't think it would be noticeable