Chou-Chou's quick review time!
First Glance! :
Personally the first glance isn't that well due to the fact the banner is the default YouTube banner, make a banner (even when it looks horrible) or get someone who will make one for you either for free or paid.
Content!:
Video taken : 'Battlefield 3 A-91 Short Kill Compilation'
The quality overall is decent. Just a kill-feed you come across every day, but the visual quality is good in my opinion.
Description!:
Video taken : 'Battlefield 3 A-91 Short Kill Compilation'
Try to add more content in your description regarding the game/video or whatsoever and be sure to add social media links if you have any social media accounts. creating decent descriptions helps your videos getting found across the web through search engines.
Tagging! :
Video taken : 'Battlefield 3 A-91 Short Kill Compilation'
You could improve on your tagging, although it might be hard to come up with good and relevant tags, be sure to try doing so. Tagging a battlefield 3 video with CoD for example is bad.
Copyright! :
Video taken : 'Battlefield 3 A-91 Short Kill Compilation'
You are using copyrighted content on this video and possibly on more videos on your channel, using copyrighted content will make you unable to get partnered, lose your partnership or get banned (eventually) from YouTube, be sure to avoid content from mainstream artist and if you want music, be sure to use Royalty free music and give the artist proper credit.
Conclusion :
Your channel isn't neither good or bad judging from a quick glance, there is a lot of room of improvement and be sure to remove the videos with copyrighted content if you want to have a chance for a partnership or do want to keep it!
Please note that this is a honest and quick review regarding your channel, it is not made to hurt you in any way.