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[DeathJohnson]

For the channel branding, like has been mentioned, the banner is simple but effective enough. You can't really add much to the banner right now, since you haven't really done enough different kinds of videos to emphasize any kind of variety yet. And the thumbnails are well made.

Video: I watched the first video, the one that starts when you click the channel. The video quality is good, the microphone and sound quality seemed good to me, but I'm definitely not an expert by any stretch on judging audio quality, or video quality for that matter. I can't tell much difference between average quality and great quality, I can only really tell the difference between bad and average, and I can say with confidence that your audio and video quality is at least average.

I would recommend doing a calmer introduction, since in the first video you seemed overly enthusiastic and it was startling for a moment and then you just kind of toned it down for the majority of the video. But then I clicked the second video and your introduction did seem a little calmer so it looks like you've already fixed that part.

Overall: I could get used to watching your videos, the all-around quality seems to be good, I just don't have any interest in watching Minecraft, unfortunately.

When you review me, I would prefer if you could make sure to comment on the microphone quality of my more recent stuff, as well as the banner, and this thumbnail. The thumbnail isn't actually on my channel yet, but it will be, and I kind of want an opinion on how it looks.

 

[NumberGS]

For the channel branding, like has been mentioned, the banner is simple but effective enough. You can't really add much to the banner right now, since you haven't really done enough different kinds of videos to emphasize any kind of variety yet. And the thumbnails are well made.

Video: I watched the first video, the one that starts when you click the channel. The video quality is good, the microphone and sound quality seemed good to me, but I'm definitely not an expert by any stretch on judging audio quality, or video quality for that matter. I can't tell much difference between average quality and great quality, I can only really tell the difference between bad and average, and I can say with confidence that your audio and video quality is at least average.

I would recommend doing a calmer introduction, since in the first video you seemed overly enthusiastic and it was startling for a moment and then you just kind of toned it down for the majority of the video. But then I clicked the second video and your introduction did seem a little calmer so it looks like you've already fixed that part.

Overall: I could get used to watching your videos, the all-around quality seems to be good, I just don't have any interest in watching Minecraft, unfortunately.

When you review me, I would prefer if you could make sure to comment on the microphone quality of my more recent stuff, as well as the banner, and this thumbnail. The thumbnail isn't actually on my channel yet, but it will be, and I kind of want an opinion on how it looks.

Channel: The banner is good I didn't understand why Ronald McDonald was there but I didn't mind it to much since it did make me laugh a bit. I'm glad that you have playlist for your videos but I would take some videos from your favorites and make a playlist for them to narrow it down. I love your profile picture because I use to play paper Mario a lot when I was a kid so it was really nostalgic but i don't know how well it will work out for others because it looks a bit unprofessional.

Video: By looking at you're Paper Mario Playthrough Part 50 you have really good quality and you have 1080p HD which is really amazing. For you're audio I would say is really good I just think you would need to speak up a bit more because I could hear you but most of the times it sounded like you were making a groaning sound and it was very unpleasant.

Overall: all you would have to do is speak up a bit more and your videos would be golden. Narrowing your playlist is just a suggestion if you want to do it you can. Other then that good luck on you're boss battle on part 51

 

[DeathJohnson]

The banner just represents the channel and games I've gone through, so each character represents a game I've played (except one represents the game I'm going to play next, because I'm getting ahead of myself), and I have a banner guy so I'll keep the banner updated the more games I play for the channel. I think next update I'll have the banner changed so none of the characters get covered up by the icon, and on the icon, I plan to keep that updated to keep up with the series I'm doing, so I don't want to spend too much time on an icon because I'll change it and then it won't be visible at all any more. The thumbnails I won't mind investing in because they'll stay there.

And I am still experimenting with how I should position the microphone and what settings it should be on. I think I liked my audio better in part 49 than part 50, but the way I positioned myself in part 49 was quite uncomfortable and if I sat like that regularly I could probably cause myself long-term damage, so I moved, but the new position doesn't seem great, because the noise of the game and the controller seem to overpower the commentary. I might switch up and record without the headphones on next time, I guess I don't really need them since I'm using a different microphone now, and maybe being able to hear myself talk better will make it easier to tell how I should be talking.

Thanks for the feedback though, I just felt I would address the comments.

 

[Dbrothers Gaming]

I think that your content is good I particularly like your commentary. If you keep uploading your channel will grow fast.
Also I think that your banner would be better if you had more color as it is now its mostly white with a few creepers, witch is a little boring though I do like the idea. Also your profile picture or whatever it's called is a bit generic but it looks like you did it your self so you could do it again but with your channel name or something.Overall I think your channel is good and your videos are great.

When you review me plz do it on the newer stuff.[DOUBLEPOST=1395504805,1395504790][/DOUBLEPOST]I think that your content is good I particularly like your commentary. If you keep uploading your channel will grow fast.
Also I think that your banner would be better if you had more color as it is now its mostly white with a few creepers, witch is a little boring though I do like the idea. Also your profile picture or whatever it's called is a bit generic but it looks like you did it your self so you could do it again but with your channel name or something.Overall I think your channel is good and your videos are great.

When you review me plz do it on the newer stuff.

 

[NumberGS]

I think that your content is good I particularly like your commentary. If you keep uploading your channel will grow fast.
Also I think that your banner would be better if you had more color as it is now its mostly white with a few creepers, witch is a little boring though I do like the idea. Also your profile picture or whatever it's called is a bit generic but it looks like you did it your self so you could do it again but with your channel name or something.Overall I think your channel is good and your videos are great.

When you review me plz do it on the newer stuff.[DOUBLEPOST=1395504805,1395504790][/DOUBLEPOST]I think that your content is good I particularly like your commentary. If you keep uploading your channel will grow fast.
Also I think that your banner would be better if you had more color as it is now its mostly white with a few creepers, witch is a little boring though I do like the idea. Also your profile picture or whatever it's called is a bit generic but it looks like you did it your self so you could do it again but with your channel name or something.Overall I think your channel is good and your videos are great.

When you review me plz do it on the newer stuff.

There seems to be a problem. I can't go to your channel

 

[Dbrothers Gaming]

https://www.youtube.com/user/DBROTHERSGAMING
here

 

[NumberGS]

https://www.youtube.com/user/DBROTHERSGAMING
here

Channel: you're banner looks a bit unprofessional I would suggest changing it or looking up so videos on how to make a banner on youtube those usually help out a lot. I would keep the Quote you have on the banner though that is a nice thing to have but change the font and make it a bit bigger its kind of hard to read. I'm glad you have a playlist for the different games you have played the organization skills will help you're channel out a lot.

Video: I watched the video Road To Crystal 1 th 8 and it was really good because I can hear you and you have it in 720p HD. The down side to it is that you're voice is to mono tone and it sometimes sounds like a groaning sound so I would suggest to talk a bit clearer and louder.

Overall: Everything seems to be good your channel is organized I would suggest doing a welcome video showing people who click on your channel to show them what its about. I would change the banner and just talk about clear. once you have that done you're youtube channel should be even better. this is just a suggestion you don't have to do it but try to make some thumbnails they will bring a decent amount of traffic to your videos

 

[Dbrothers Gaming]

Channel: you're banner looks a bit unprofessional I would suggest changing it or looking up so videos on how to make a banner on youtube those usually help out a lot. I would keep the Quote you have on the banner though that is a nice thing to have but change the font and make it a bit bigger its kind of hard to read. I'm glad you have a playlist for the different games you have played the organization skills will help you're channel out a lot.

Video: I watched the video Road To Crystal 1 th 8 and it was really good because I can hear you and you have it in 720p HD. The down side to it is that you're voice is to mono tone and it sometimes sounds like a groaning sound so I would suggest to talk a bit clearer and louder.

Overall: Everything seems to be good your channel is organized I would suggest doing a welcome video showing people who click on your channel to show them what its about. I would change the banner and just talk about clear. once you have that done you're youtube channel should be even better. this is just a suggestion you don't have to do it but try to make some thumbnails they will bring a decent amount of traffic to your videos

thanks for the feedback. Im doing pretty much all that, working on the welcome video now, and ya i know i sound mono tone i dont really sound like that im using me iphone to record and the sound quality leaves something to be desired.