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[oasis gamer]

I feel that in order to strenghten as content creators its important you get as much constructive critisism as possible, because noone channel will be perfect, but if we help eachother out it, we may come closer to perfection then before

So the idea of the post is that you review my channel, use as much critism as you want, and also tell them me what im doing well, and i will reciprocate that and put in alot of detail into my review of your channel

 

[Ninja]

Your Zombies video had a few flaws in the commentary, but if you take the time to listen through it, you can edit most of the stumbling out, also some ambient music could have made it a bit more enjoyable. Your Minecraft videos are pretty well edited. Just make sure the game sounds are lower than your voices, mob sounds spiked quite a lot, not too much fun with headphones haha. Other than that, your thumbnails are really good, with the the exception of the Forest one red text on red background is though to read. Banner and Icon look good, plus they match, which to me is really good. Just work on the audio editing really, and you should be golden!