Hello UltimateCroz! I checked out your channel and watch some of your videos, so I have some thoughts. Let me break them down:
Artwork/Channel Layout: I feel that your channel art and layout are both very solid. Your icon/logo matches your banner/cover art very well, and it is all pretty original.
Thumbnails: This is an area where you can use some work. Your thumbs are pretty bland, and some of them do not even contain any text.
Video/Audio Quality: You video quality goes up to 720p, so you've met the necessary requirements there. And your commentary is clear and matches up well with the in-game audio. No issues here.
Commentary: This is another area in which you could use some work. There are some moments that drag and some moments where you go quiet. I also feel like you could add in some more humor and spontaneity to your recordings. You have enthusiasm, but it doesn't always turn into compelling recordings.
Misc.: I feel like most of your videos are too long for a start-up Let's Play channel. Most of them run 20+ minutes, and some even get close to 30 minutes in length. These run-times won't be an issue when you have a following, but most viewers won't give new channels the time of day, especially if they have long videos. Staying in the 10-20 minute range should be a new goal for you and your channel. I also feel like your game selection could be an issue for a lot of people. Watch Dogs is okay because it is a new game and there is a lot of demand for it, but Final Fantasy and Call Of Duty are games that so many channels have done. A lot of the Let's Play audience shuns people who record CoD, so keep that in mind. If you add some more variety in games, you may see more views.
I think that your channel is promising. I'm definitely not an aficionado on Let's Plays, but I've read my fair share of feedback. Hopefully some of these critiques helps you with your growth.
