I'm gonna slap a 7/10 onto your channel.
On the positive side, your thumbnails are appealing, your titles are well tagged for the most part, and I personally very much like your profile picture. However, due to the nature of this thread, and my above statement, I must make a few criticisms.
Right off the bat, I see NO branding whatsoever. Sure your thumbnails are of a consistent theme and style, but I takes me to have to look specifically at your profile picture to find your logo. I should not have to!
Something more minor that hit me immediately, is your name. I appreciate it is a catchy name with a badass undertone, but sometimes when you include 'By Warhammer' in your title, I feel almost as if the exclusive reason for the viewcount is many people's association with Warhammer 40k. Warhammer is usually associated with the franchise, and it is almost clickbaiting to reference Battlefield 4 and Warhammer in the same title. While subs won't make that mistake, I felt as a fan of the series that it should be mentioned.
On another note, I'm not seeing much retention in my videos. Some tips on why you would click away would be appreciated
Hi, thanks for the critics, I really appreciate it.
I have added my watermark on my videos now so seeing my logo is made easy.
And as far the name goes, on every video of mine in the description it is stated that it is a Battlefield 3/4 or whatever video and ("Filmed in Battlefield - EA/DICE")
Even the titles of my videos contain the name of the game, so I guess it shouldn't be a problem.
As far as your channel goes,
Your banner is nice and a lot cleaner than that of other minecraft youtubers, but I feel that the "Spiffing STU" in the blue on the right side of your banner can be made a bit more cleaner since it looks distorted.
Also, your channel homepage includes more news about to whom you have subscribed, what videos you have liked and etc.
Maybe add a channel trailer to your homepage and add some playlists?
Thats my view.
Also, I see that most of your thumbnails don't have titles on them.
I'll give your channel a 6.5/10
9/10!
Because your channel is awesome! I don't see much points where you can improve, your banner is clear, your video quality is high. Only thing is I would make more playlists so your channel becomes more ''viewer friendly''. Keep it up!
Hi, thanks a lot for the review.
I have already made playlists and did a few more small things

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7.5/10
Looks pretty good, but if I was you I would remove the liked videos and recent activity to make it look a little more professional. Replace them with a playlist section or something.
Hi, thanks for the review.
I have created new playlists and removed the liked and recent video section and I feel it really looks a lot better
