rate my new series

+Good advice.
+No pauses
+Balanced sound
+Great pace
+Great length

-Sounds..Like.. You.. Are.. A... Robot... Or... Reading... A....... ... .. Script...

*Nit picky*
*Lighting could be a bit more even
*The constant stare through the camera is a bit intense to me

Great job not much I can suggest!
 
Hey man, Watched the video added to the thread. "How to increase views" Not sure if this is the video you wanted feedback on. Firstly, I appreciate you making videos like this for the starting channels. I also like how each word you said is audible and clear. So here are some of my suggestions for improving. Especially with videos like vlogs or such. You will want to keep the camera centered at you and zoomed in a little more. Check out angles/lightings and such it'll make the video more presentable. Secondly, since your face is on the video throughout, I recommend feeling lighter? smile a little more as if your having a conversation. From my perspective it looks as if your ready to eat a cow or beat up the camera man. Lighten up ~ >.< ~ Look at some cat pics or something that makes you happy before recording. That smile at the end was great, more of that in between will make the video better. Also, watch out for your constant blinking, some might get triggered because of it. Haha, finally, this part may be subjective, - putting a little humor in your script will definitely keep retention up. Some viewers may come for the advice but others might just stay by for the humor. Also, adding a bit of background music throughout will also retain attention. Good Luck! I hope you made it through the end of my post. Once again, Thanks for making videos like this. Your a hero!
 
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