Quick video review

[AmazinAsian]

Hey there everyone,

I've been out of making youtube videos for a while and am slowly getting back into it all.

I recently made this video for 4/20 and wouldn't mind getting some constructive criticism.

I realize the production quality isn't amazing. It's just something I threw together real quick.

So here it is:

Thanks!

 

[elPepin]

That was fun, I liked the fast camera angles and the boldness of the vid. The only suggestion I have is that I was left waiting for a climax, a punch line. I don't know like suddenly both dropping dead? or you could have use a loud bang or a punch sound to emphasize the message at the end (if that was the intended punch line) and leave it on the screen a bit longer. Also if I were you I would put the feature video at the end, I had no time to read it because I was engaged in the vid. Congrats!