Please Review my FIRST PRANK video!

[thatoneshowthough]

Please let me know what you guys think! Working on putting a video out every week consistently.
Critique and criticize please those are the ones that make me better!

 

[Charlie2]

prank videos work better when its on random people or when they arent expecting it, this one seemed staged so then it loses all the omg he did that to a random or omg he just got out the shower and got flour thrown at him, it just become on he let some hit him with flour

 

[thatoneshowthough]

Oh it's all definitely staged the bit is that he got super angry and put gasoline on my car lol the pranks were the events leading up to the punch line of the gasoline on the car. Just a sketch working on sketch comedy

 

[LittleMunchlax]

It's looking great but maybe next time use random people?
Now it's looking that it's really made, that he knows what gonna happen and then there is no more fun but for first time it's looking great!