please review my channel!

[TheSwagLlama]

hi. im a small youtube with only 55 subs. i focus mainly on gaming but do the ood mlg video's. im partnered with the all mighty network, freedom. im also in a little group of 6 other small youtubers. i would appreciate it if you could view my channel and tell me what you think!

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCE4MFg8WYXyoPiyiJmAPHpQ

thanks!

oh and by the way, the red button below does not work as someone claimed their custom link as my username! i've tried contacting them but they seem to not want to co-operate! sorry

 

[Mikeyy]

Hey. So I checked out your channel and I like that you are consistent with making videos, but I watched your last two videos and you were kind of hard to understand. I suggest investing in a decent audio mic. I also your channel would look a lot better if you had a channel trailer. One last thing, try not to make your videos so long, unless you have a set amount of viewers, long videos will drive away new viewers. But yeah, I like where you are going here with your channel, just a few improvements and things we be a lot better for you.

 

[Jawad Soomro]

Well it is awesome to know your consistency, brilliant job
I would say that you should change the banner, logo and thumbnails, if u will be more artistic, audience would love checking out your channel
The Voice Audio quality is clean and awesome
The commentary is cool
The intro is pretty cool But the text design is not so good, maybe you can change the font or make it bold and larger
Cool editing of putting memes and texts while you play game
I would say to be as more funny as you can
All the best

 

[TheSwagLlama]

thanks guys for your feedback, i will definitely take in what you said and apply it to my channel! thanks again