Please feedback my latest video

[terror569]

Hey guys,
as you can see I'm a new member on this website and I'd love to ask you to review my youtube video.
My channel is about gaming (yaa another one with the gaming content) but I'm also planning to make some funny videos about me being dressed up as a women and make fun of "gamer girls", I would also love to do short horror movies in the future.
As I was editing this video I noticed that there are some mistakes that I have to improve but I need it to hear from you.
The video link is over here->

Thank you for your time and I hope that atleast one of you will enjoy the video!
Have a nice day all of you
Terror[DOUBLEPOST=1468405987,1468387690][/DOUBLEPOST]anybody please?[DOUBLEPOST=1468431771][/DOUBLEPOST]ok one more bump then I'll leave it

 

[Rolz]

Whatsup Terror,

I'm not sure if this is what you're looking for because its not really an editing issue but I would add in a channel intro into your videos. I just think it looks a lot more professional when all your videos have the same opening you know, shows that consistency.
But again, I'm not sure if this is what you want and also I am equally new to this scene so you do not have to take my suggestion if you don't want to!

 

[terror569]

Whatsup Terror,

I'm not sure if this is what you're looking for because its not really an editing issue but I would add in a channel intro into your videos. I just think it looks a lot more professional when all your videos have the same opening you know, shows that consistency.
But again, I'm not sure if this is what you want and also I am equally new to this scene so you do not have to take my suggestion if you don't want to!

Hey!
thank you very much I'll work on it! I had intro and outro before that I really liked but I feel like I gotta make a new one. I'll be working on it!

 

[Rolz]

Hey!
thank you very much I'll work on it! I had intro and outro before that I really liked but I feel like I gotta make a new one. I'll be working on it!

Awesome, drop me a link when its up! I'll be keen to check it out